Thanks for the feedback, I tried putting that 1 point of Fury to veteran's scar but i need 8 points in defence to be able to do so, and i dont want to remove that 1 point of Summoner's Insight because i would like keep that -15sec to my Flash.

am currently working on the the over all.

-Absolute.0

Let's see

Thy sins
1. Minimal cheatsheet, might want to put in alternative item picks
2. Runes are excluded from the cheatsheet
3. "Invisible" text in spoilers is visible
4. No tactics included
5. "This is your main damaging ability, max this first, no questions ask. Believe me." Yet a lot of people max Q, can you maybe explain why it would be better to max W? (Put the answer in the guide)

Thy blessing
1. Comment to vote is on
2. Overal decent cheatsheet
3. "Okay" use of coding and structure
4. I like your originality with guidewriting

Result: Path of the Student
I can see you can write guides, now do something with those skillz :P
For starters: Cheatsheet is very empty, might want to fill it up with the alternative items that are explained in your guide. Also, the runes here are missing which is just a sloppy mistake you need to fix. Oh, and you might want to put 1 points of Fury in to Veteran's Scars , because the 30 bonus health is more rewarding than 1% bonus attack speed :P

Some mistakes in the guide itself aswell, like the invisible text that is visible :P
A missing tactics section, and I didn't get my answer about the skill order (do not answer it here, answer it in your guide) :P

Overal, you have stuff to do.
Have fun :D

oh... i see.. thank you.
But.. how's this one so far? ('_')

Orianna's cause of death is detailed in her champion judgment, she over extended while training against turrets and got blasted in the face by turret fire. Either her instructor was too slow to react, or the controller malfunctioned, I cannot recall, but the turret then blasted her again before she could get up then finished her off on the third blast. Those judgments were great, I wish they were still written.

Confirmed

You can archive the guide and still link it to people.

Also, don't feel that you "owe us answers". We're here to help you learn how to write a guide.

The thing is, i normally wouldn't publish it if it's incomplete, but as stated at the end of the guide.

I owe several people, dragon20217 included, answers because of a mistake too embarrassing to retell.

and believe me, the said mistake is even worse than publishing this unfinished guide.

I understand that doing so will likely put my guide at a very low rating, but I will not archive it.

-Absolute.0

My finger is hovering over the downvote guide. Archive it, finish it.

Has nothing on how to teamfight.

What? It's not like I downvoted this. Posting an unpublished build is basically giving a middle finger to your readers, even if you didn't intend for it to be taken that way. It's just in poor taste. I'll gladly upvote this once its complete, but only then.

Besides, if I upvoted this build while it's incomplete, that would be unfair to all the other guides I downvoted for being incomplete. I'm already streching my glorious Knight's Code of Honor by not downvoting this just for the fact that it has good formatting. YOU, good kind sir, are the one that needs to calm thy breasts.

So what if it's unfinished, it still looks good, and I know it's going to get better so calm your tits about it being unfinished.

Never publish a guide unfinished. Ever. Even if it looks this good, an unfinished guide is simply that; unfinished.