OMFG buy some def items to just a tips........Because how u gonna do in late game when alll fcous u and u got no def item....

The more I see these kinds of twitch builds the more disappointed I become.
1) spamming characters can get your guide flagged
2) Not very detailed
3) you stack bloodthirsters instead of getting survivability

I don't want to mess with your confidence because the guide has potential, but really its just not enough. Also for jungler you may want to add a section specifically or counter jungling / roaming. P.S Also add that any tier 1 jungler should jungle if possible instead of Twitch.
P.P.S Getting expunge increases your simple 5 hit burst by almost 90 + damage each level while the attack speed will only increase your DPS slightly at the earlier levels

Putting in a section to make it a guide is silly. The fact that you want to call this a guide, but don't have enough words to make it a guide completely contradicts itself. If you actually want to have a useful guide over other Twitch guides, actually put up facts about your build and/or gameplay.

Here's a guide on BBCoding, Pictures, etc.
Making A Guide