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UPVOTE/DOWNVOTE: Have a +1, your guide is pretty good and deserving of an upvote. The only thing you can do to improve it even further (if you want to, by no means is this necessary) is to add some gameplay videos to support what you wrote.
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Nice Ivern guide you have there! I would like to try Ivern soon, he seems like a fun champion. Your guide brought me some light on that champion. Plus, it last got updated on my birthday (March 14th), wow!
Some points I would like to state here which are my own theorycrafting thoughts:
1. The critical chance mark is not needed for Ivern - it's a waste of a rune slot. While you could say that an extra critical chance percent won't hurt, it actually lowers the overall efficiency of a rune page.
2. My actual preference for runes for Ivern would be going 9x
3. I fully agree with masteries here, you did a nice job with explanation!
4. Consider a situative
5. Get some advanced Ivern stuff in that guide like offsetting the jungle timers properly.
Good luck with your guide mate!
-SD
Cheat Sheet
- Runes are fine
- Items seem to be fine
- I like the skill build
- Perhaps mention somewhere that Q max is something that has been seen in pro play
- Just the pros and cons
Introduction
- General information is weird, some weird grammar and word choice
Who am I?
- Makes sense why some of the English can be weird
- Perhaps try to find someone that would be willing to go over this with you and help you rewrite
Pros/Cons
- I like the info in this section, but the orange [+] and [-] feels a little tacky, and are too similar to each other
- I do like the color scheme, perhaps bigger icons? You could get away with leaving it, but it just seems like it can be better
Picking Ivern
- The icons showing champions that work well with Ivern is nice, but perhaps center/make the icons larger. They feel very awkward right now.
- The ending paragraph could be cleaned up (formatting-wise) to make it more readable
Runes
- The rune selection is fine, but it might help to explain further than you do. You say you take scaling health seals to optimize for late game, but maybe explain why those are the best to optimize for late game (perhaps versus scaling armor?)
- Assume that many people using this guide don't know the reasoning behind many of your choices, make them understand!
Masteries
- They’re fine, a little similar to runes in that perhaps you can explain more.
- It also might help to break the text up by tree, and to make it more legible by giving the more important masteries their own section
- Similar to how you did your items
Items
- I really like your item section, you list the choices and explain both the pros and the cons of said items
Spells
- You have a lot of information here, and it's broken up well! Consider adding subheadings for the different paragraphs such as “Description” or “How to Use”
Playing Ivern
- This section seems great! I don’t play Ivern so I don’t feel qualified to instruct you on what's better or worse.
Sorry about how long it took, dealing with some personal stuff right now.