It might be beneficial for you to turn C2V (comment to vote) so you can get more feedback.

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• Might be good for you to add a section where you explain the gameplay and her abilities as well as mentioning how to use them effectively.
  
• What role is this guide for? I really can't tell. You explain item choices well but in your cheetsheet it looks like you have mainly support items but then you also recommend to build items that would be better for a more mage or full utility focused Lulu build.
  
• Mention Alternatives, even if you don't use them often. Ellaborate and expand on why you don't build Frost Queen's Claim and compare it with talisman of ascension rather than taking the cheap way out and saying:
  
  BlunterMonk wrote:

  Frost Queen's Claim offers more for most mages, but you won't always get to land an AA on an enemy champion.
  
  
• Maybe change the title to Support: Super Lulu - A Shooting Star. As I previously stated, I'm confused to why this build for support Lulu yet a lot of the items seem to be for a more carry mage oriented Lulu build.

It looks decent so far. Just keep on updating it and you'll get somewhere. If you need help with BB-Coding don't hesitate to message me. :3

GOOD LUCK!