Ah, I meant notes in the cheatsheet, but you seem to added some in :)

I think it's a good guide overall, though I am no professional at this. There are people who dedicate their time here judging and rating guides, and trust me, they can be a huge help in improving. It certainly worked for me.

But based on my limited experience, it looks good, and seems informative. I am curious though, why is almost everything under spoilers?

OH, will do. just assumed that the cheat sheet was a good look on tool once you had read the guide. I explain everything in the Items section.

Fixed it

I just realized that you are the one with the top rated guide, I'm amazed you took notice of what I've done. What do you think of my guide overall?

On your cheat sheet, I'd make the finished example something people could use in an average game (you have it listed as "don't actually use"). Thing is, a lot of people just glance at the cheat sheet for runes and masteries, along with items, and are quite likely to go with whatever you present as "finished". They are probably looking at your guide during loading screen, and don't have time to read the whole thing.

Plus you don't have notes for items at all, so I'd doubly recommend getting an example up that you think is worthy. If you have time, I would suggest filling out the notes as well; usually you list off what is the best first or second item in the list (so example: Randuins then Deadmans), with a quick lil explanation of why.

Because if I saw that, as a new shyvana player, and read the "don't actually use", then I'm going to wonder "what am I supposed to be doing?" Not everyone who looks at this guide are super pro and will just know.

Guides are a starting point, give them something to work with.

blade means stalker's blade right?

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If they got an annoying CC team then build it after Blade. If you are finding yourself competing and invading then get it 4th item-ish. If you feel ballsy and know you can 1v1 enemy in jungle then get it after BORK

where do you get frozen mallet when you do?

cool, thx for the support. if you have any awesome replays or a match history I could add to the list that would be awesome!

I've been using this and I gotta say, it's so broken lol. Although sometimes I switch up and get Frozen Mallet instead, depends on champs