Not Updated For Current Season
This guide has not yet been updated for the current season. Please keep this in mind while reading. You can see the most recently updated guides on the browse guides page
x
The Prophet of the Void!
Build Guide By Qwixter
13,175
Views
4
Comments
13,175
Views
4
Comments
Malzahar Build Guide By Qwixter
x
Did this guide help you? If so please give them a vote or leave a comment.
You can even win prizes by doing so!
Vote
Comment
I liked this Guide
I didn't like this Guide
Thank You!
Your votes and comments encourage our guide authors to continue
creating helpful guides for the League of Legends community.
Malzahar Guide
The Prophet of the Void!
I like it :)
Yo thanks bro.
I do have to say, your guide is really nice in the fact that it's in depth! :)
However, I've seen a lot of guides that add too much color, but unfortunately, you are suffering from the opposite of that problem. Since your guide is fairly long, you want to make it interesting for your readers. Add some color! Spice it up a bit! For example, what a lot of people do is they make the Pro / Cons section Green / Red, respectively. This will also make the guide a bit easier to read, as you won't be staring at a large, white wall.
Another suggestion I have is to make the items section a bit more interesting to read. Since you've already liked the icon to MOBAfire's database, the reader can just mouse over the item to see its stats. Writing it all out is unnecessary, and frankly, makes it a bit terrifying to look at o.O
Have you tried using columns? It's really handy. Here's an example of what your item section could look like:
And so on. I literally just copy and pasted it xD Plus added some links to the database. I find those also make the text a bit more fun to read.
But overall, you have a really nice guide here! Just make it a bit more fun to read and maybe change the coding a bit, and it'll be perfect! Of course, you don't have to listen to me :) Everyone has their opinions ^_^ I just threw my two cents in!
To tell you the truth this is my first guide!!! I was going for more in depth than design really. I get what you mean and I try to make another guide one day I will definitely do what you said.
However, I've seen a lot of guides that add too much color, but unfortunately, you are suffering from the opposite of that problem. Since your guide is fairly long, you want to make it interesting for your readers. Add some color! Spice it up a bit! For example, what a lot of people do is they make the Pro / Cons section Green / Red, respectively. This will also make the guide a bit easier to read, as you won't be staring at a large, white wall.
Another suggestion I have is to make the items section a bit more interesting to read. Since you've already liked the icon to MOBAfire's database, the reader can just mouse over the item to see its stats. Writing it all out is unnecessary, and frankly, makes it a bit terrifying to look at o.O
Have you tried using columns? It's really handy. Here's an example of what your item section could look like:
And so on. I literally just copy and pasted it xD Plus added some links to the database. I find those also make the text a bit more fun to read.
But overall, you have a really nice guide here! Just make it a bit more fun to read and maybe change the coding a bit, and it'll be perfect! Of course, you don't have to listen to me :) Everyone has their opinions ^_^ I just threw my two cents in!