Thank you for your insight, for the past month or so, ive been playing a lot solo trying to get a grasp of 1 the new shen and poppy, 2 the new masteries after their buffs and 3 trying out Eye of the Equinox, which i find is a lot better if snowballing now. From now on ill be focusing a lot more on this guide, and the small update i just made will be the start of it, any help rewarding the aesthetics of the guide will be great, but i have an idea of how i could do this, its just going to take a while. -facehunter33

Good guide in terms of content and build, but aestethically speaking it's a mess. Lack of spacing, bright bold colours, lots of centered colourful blocky text etc all make the guide very hard on the eyes. I'd be willing to help you out with this if you're interested.

+1'd anyhow

Wow. This is by far the best guide I've ever seen on Alistar. Very detailed. Ward Position, etc., simply spoken: awesome. But there are two minor things I disagree with. They regard the masteries. First Runic Armor is much better than those cute 45hp because it scales with his ult and his e, although last isn't very strong. And I would always take bandit, because it's a huge amount of gold you get there for free. With your builds there shouldn't be any mana problems lategame, and early game you don't have much mana+health to restore because base amount is low:P Summed up Dangerous game would approx. give you ~20-100mana the whole early game, which is absolutely useless/sweet.

Regards PrinceHugin

Hi there, you requested a re-review from my review service, found here

Attached below is a PDF of your guide that i've marked up with my comments.


See the PDF for the full list of my comments
I'd like you to add more pictures to your guide. The guide still feels like large walls of text, and the addition of pictures (again, see the comments in my guide for some recommendations) can really space out the text in your guide, and also cut down on the amount of text in your guide on the basis that the pictures will really help your readers understand the points that you're bringing about.
Another major thing that i'd like you to focus on for your next redaction of your guide is organization. I felt like there was very little flow to your guide. You went from like, comboes, to team fights, to laning, to back to team fights, to warding, to items - just didn't make much sense to me.
Lastly, I'd like you to add more clarity to your content - I think that you sometimes leave things in your guide ambiguous, or not fully explained.

Once you've made some edits to your guide, feel free to submit your guide to my review service for another re-review =) If you think you really got something out of my review, just throw me a +rep. It gives me a good idea of whether I need to re-evaluate some aspect of my guide reviewing.

Thanks for your time,
Michael

Hi there, you requested a review from my review service, found here

Attached below is a PDF of your guide that i've marked up with my comments.


Some general points:

• I'd like to see you add more pictures to the guide. Especially for the gameplay section, I think that that would give your readers a better idea of how alistar works
• I'd like you to better teach your readers how to 'pull the trigger'. I want you to teach your readers how to identify opportunities to tower dive opponents, identify exactly how far away an opponent can be while still being 'caught', you get the idea.

See the PDF for the full list of my comments

Once you've made some edits to your guide, feel free to submit your guide to my review service for a re-review =) If you think you really got something out of my review, just throw me a +rep. It gives me a good idea of whether I need to re-evaluate some aspect of my guide reviewing.

Thanks for your time,
Michael