Add bloodthirster(at least 1) into your build, since it gives you a lot of extra burst.

nice start, you should work on some more in-depth information. You also want to work on some better coding, youve got the basic stuff down, try something more advanced.

Very good guide, however my only changes would be that i wouldnt rush the trinity, i would get the brutalizer then sheen then finish yoummus then finish trinity. Also the runes i would choose for talon would be armor penetration because his ad scalings on his abilities arent that good however the armor penetration scales too good with his abilities. Ive also found that contrary to popular belief infinity edge is a good item on talon cuz his q can crit and stacked with his passive it can deal amazingly high amounts of damage.