You need to expand your content more

• expand on masteries (meaning explain why you take each individual mastery and its use)
• add some images of his abilities, not just using the {{ability}} code on each ability and item. Ya know, give it some flavor
• study this to help with columns and much more, they make guides look beautiful.
• the guide feels like a wall, very dull and not a guide yet. I know you can do better

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First of all, thanks for reading and for the comment, it means a lot, well second, i want to apologize if the build is not good enough for you, it is my first guide and i didn't really knew what to put there, and I never sayd that Battle Cry was a bad skill early game, i agree with you that it gives a lot of sustain and atack speed, i just don't like to maximize it for first or second, The bccoding error in mercury's treads is already fixed and i explained why I max E even in lane, because it gives a lot of damage in the early game if maxed first and it gets the cooldown reduced...

You've got some bccoding errors in items, such as mercury threads. Also, in your pro & cons Brute Force and Archaic Knowledge are really bad inserted. If you want a picture that represents pro and cons, you should use icon= brute force size= X. Dont forget the brackets. Also, for your abilities pick, I would understand why you max Audacious Charge first if you were jungling, but in this case you are a laning xin, so I would recomend maxing Three Talon Strike because of the damage it gives you. Also, Battle Cry is a really strong early game ability, it offers you sustain to stay in lane longer and attack speed for better trades, I don't understand your maxing resoning but anyways, I suggest you work into your build and read jhoijhoi's coding build, until then, your guide is really bad in my opinion. Item picks are good tho.

But that ((E)) Audacious Charge though..