First of all, if they build any armor, your damage will disappear. Also, at least one defensive item would be beneficial. Otherwise good build.

Great guide, but you really need some BBC codeing. Otherwise your guide doesnt look nearly as cool. If you go under the featured section you will see a guide on how to make a guide. This is a good spot to learn how to do all of this.

+1, and GL

You should turn on comment to vote.
Also your guide seems ok, but your link for jhoijhoi is dead, there is no space between the to and jhoijhoi, thus the color is applied to the "to" aswell.
You may want to fix some small changes, and add some BB coding.
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