Congrats on your first guide!

Let me be the first to review this though:

- Should work more on the guide before publishing it. By that, I mean adding BBcodes, colors, bolding, italicizing, and underlining. You could always use jhoijhoi's Making A Guide to strengthen up the look of your guide.

- As for your build, your runes are not very optimal. I understand your primary idea for Volibear, which is being a metagolemtank, but in this case, not only will he not be able to last hit and farm efficiently, but he will not be able to trade effectively at top. I would probably go a basic AD set of runes even though you're going tanky. I recommend ArPen marks, Armor seals, MR/lvl glyphs, and flat AD quints.

- As for your masteries, it is not that optimal. I would rather see you go 9/21/0, or hell even 0/21/9 (add on to Swiftness if you desire more speed). going 4/26/0 will hurt his damage output a bit. Didn't you say that he was an excellent killer in your introduction section? He would probably want Weapon Expertise in Offense tree to be a better killer.

- Your item build is fine except for the second Warmog's Armor. There are a lot of good 6th items out there that could be used according to the games such as Banshee's Veil, Randuin's Omen, Guardian Angel, Frozen Mallet, and so on and forth. You should also tell your viewers that Thornmail should be bought only if their bruiser and AD carry are too strong for you.

- Add more content! Add more chapters! Us viewers like reading nice information.

Good luck!

PS: PM me if you need anything. I'm giving a +1 just 'cause I crossed on your build on the main page, and luckily I'm the first voter/commenter.

PS #2: Turn on Vote To Comment for your guide (found on the right hand side when you're editing your guide).