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Creator: xMusketeer May 25, 2011 3:33am
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xMusketeer
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Hey guys, I made a new signature yesterday, I would love some feedback, tell me what you think about it!
Thanks guys :D
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Moved to 'Signatures' section.
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wait is the sig that is in your sig the sig you made?

if so, pretty cool, but maybe you can try some other effects and opacities and such, it kinda looks like you just took it and did a red splash brush all over :x

Thanks to TRUeLM, Plastictree, Scrax, Xiaowiriamu, foggy12, JahGFX, jhoijhoi, msrobinson, JEFFY40HANDS, Nyoike, MissMaw, and me :) for the sigs!
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Being brief here:
Criticism:
1. Plain
2. Lot of empty space
3. Focus needs improving.
4. Render of bad quality
5. Brush is kinda bad quality
[maybe uploaded/saved in BMP?]
6. How does the blood splatter surround your render (ie. how does it relate?)
7. no flow
8. not sure if theres a border or not.
9. Lighting?
10. Looks like you've stroked over your render, kinda looks pixelated though

Compliments
1. Despite its negatives its feeds from it's simplicity making it a nice signature
2. Background (behind blood splatter) is fitting
3. Your render despite being where it is captures a lot of attention so the focus is right. however could be improved.

Overall rating for a general sig regarding a subjective test: 5/10

How you could improve it:
1. Get better brushes
2. Possible center your render or try and locate a flow
3. Create lighting to help identify depth and improve focus
4. Border
5. If you're going for a cut-out "strok" look improve your stroke thickness. Make sure it blends into the backgrounds color pallete though.
6. Maybe add more aftereffects such as fractals, and c4d's to help gain an edge
7. When using brushes make sure you pick a color from your render and then do it, this is so its nicely blended and also not distract the main focal point. At the moment the blood splatter is slightly distracting and is unbalanced when dictating color coordination.
8. Get a better image in terms of quality
9. Save in PNG format and upload in PNG
10. Add text or 'other' to fill in blank space.
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Lol I know it's nooby, but It's my first sig, and yes, the sig is the one in my sig atm. Thanks for the feedback Xiaowiriamu, Ill try improve on my next sig, Thanks!
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Being brief here:
Criticism:
1. Plain
2. Lot of empty space
3. Focus needs improving.
4. Render of bad quality
5. Brush is kinda bad quality
[maybe uploaded/saved in BMP?]
6. How does the blood splatter surround your render (ie. how does it relate?)
7. no flow
8. not sure if theres a border or not.
9. Lighting?
10. Looks like you've stroked over your render, kinda looks pixelated though

Compliments
1. Despite its negatives its feeds from it's simplicity making it a nice signature
2. Background (behind blood splatter) is fitting
3. Your render despite being where it is captures a lot of attention so the focus is right. however could be improved.

Overall rating for a general sig regarding a subjective test: 5/10

How you could improve it:
1. Get better brushes
2. Possible center your render or try and locate a flow
3. Create lighting to help identify depth and improve focus
4. Border
5. If you're going for a cut-out "strok" look improve your stroke thickness. Make sure it blends into the backgrounds color pallete though.
6. Maybe add more aftereffects such as fractals, and c4d's to help gain an edge
7. When using brushes make sure you pick a color from your render and then do it, this is so its nicely blended and also not distract the main focal point. At the moment the blood splatter is slightly distracting and is unbalanced when dictating color coordination.
8. Get a better image in terms of quality
9. Save in PNG format and upload in PNG
10. Add text or 'other' to fill in blank space.

Hey again thanks for the info, if you want ( or have the time ) I could send you the image code and you could edit it for me?
You dont have to, but that would be really cool!
thanks
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Awesome criticism.
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