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achieve fabulously ~ astrolia's design critique...

Creator: astrolia September 2, 2014 1:42pm
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Hello friends. I'm a professionally employed web designer and also the winner of the Fabulous award in the Mobafire season 4 guide contest. Would you like me to critique your guide design and help you achieve fabulously? Reply to this thread with a link to your guide. Note that reviews will be purely about aesthetics, readability, etc (I specialize in UIX and IA) and not actual quality of guide content. So why would you even want this review or care about it? ...honestly I have no idea, but if something is nice to look at it, people will be more inclined to read it!





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- Reviews will come with a downvote if I think your guide is so visually offensive that people shouldn't be seeing it.
- I won't code or design for you. There's plenty of coding help and coding/graphic services on the forums if you need assistance.
- I can change what this says whenever I want. Deal with it.
- This is definitely not very serious. Don't take it too seriously. (But I will seriously downvote your guide if it's offensive to my eyes.)
hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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You have a coding error.


"Deal with it.[/it]"
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It was fixed before you even replied.

FABULOUS UN-MAX.
hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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that coding mistake though :^)


hope you get a lot of requests tho :))
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astrolia wrote:
It was fixed before you even replied.

FABULOUS UN-MAX.


Well, I can not write very fast on my Phone.
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A quick look says that it is fabulous un-max.

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hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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Damn :(
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astrolia wrote:
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- I won't code or design for you. There's plenty of coding help and coding/graphic services on the forums if you need assistance.

Not sure if this means you will or won't help me but I'll give it a shot anyway.
http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/haunting-the-jungle-nightmare-style-109358

Obviously it's not an aesthetic masterpiece so if you have some (preferably fairly simple) suggestions on how to better present my guide I'd be happy to hear them. Especially the walls of text in the later sections.
Thanks to Jovy for the sig!
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