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Fruxo's Guide Review Service

Creator: Fruxo July 14, 2019 4:37pm
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Hello, I'm Fruxo on the EU West (EUW) server, and I peaked Gold 1 this season, and is currently sitting there having loads of fun. I know the most when it comes to the Mid & Jungle roles but I have general knowledge of all roles so you can ask about any role/champion that you want. Together with this i’m also a really big Ahri, Vi & Xayah enthusiast and they have been my go to champions for pretty much every single season of this game. I won’t claim that i’m some sort of an expert in this game, because I'm really not even close. I’m just here to help people in creating and updating their guides to hopefully get them down the right path, and if they’re already in the right path, i’ll try my best to help on getting them even better then they currently already are.

My Service

I'll review your guide if you want - But keep in mind, that no guide ever improved massively or naturally with only a few compliments and tips. However, here are some notes about my review service:
  • I'll make my reviews as fair and honest as I possibly can. I’ll give you compliments on parts of your guide that I think are looking good and doesn’t need to change at all, and i’ll criticize parts of the guide that I disagree with in some sort of way unless you tell me otherwise.
  • If your guide has a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, I won't bother pointing them out unless you specifically want me to only do those. Otherwise I’ll just say that it has spelling errors. This is because it puts a lot of work on me and it’s also pretty easily avoidable by proofreading your guide (or using a program to do so) & checking for grammar.
  • I believe that editing a guide is always a very interactive process, and that both readers and guide writers will be able to benefit from having multiple reviews of their guides. If I’ve already critiqued your guide before, feel free to reply on it with your thoughts and concerns after considering the points that I’ve brought forward to you, just @ me so that i’ll be able to see it! Obviously if you don’t want to give a reply on my review, you don’t have to, it’s completely up to you. However, if your guide only has spelling errors, I won't reply to it unless you submit another review here later on once it's been updated.
  • I know that i’m not the best reviewer and critic as there are probably others that are even better than me. - I’m just trying my best to be able to give you some actual helpful feedback that you can use to improve your guide as helping other people is something I find amazing with this particular site in general.
  • I will be putting a score on your guide (shown at the bottom of the thread in the spoiler "Guides I've Reviewed so far) once the review is finished. The lowest being 1 & the highest being 150, you'll not be able to see the score I've given. More about this in the spoiler below named "My Review Style". This is mainly if you want to know how I critizise guides & how I will be reviewing them.

My Review Style


The Rules I Expect You To Follow
  • Have you read Jhoijhoi's Making a Guide tutorial before posting your request?
  • Try to use the template below when you're requesting a review, it'll make it easier for me.
  • Don't request a review on a newly published guide, I kinda dislike new guides that gets archived a few days after i've finished posting my review as it feels like I just wasted time if nothing is going to come out of it.
  • I have the rights to completely deny your request for a review if I so choose.
  • I will only review guides made in English, I don't know much of other languages & I don't want to bother trying to understand them, it won't happen so you can forget the idea of it now.

Voting
  • Upvotes are always going to be earned. If I do indeed upvote your guide, you should feel very good about it - I do have rather high expectations for guides, and I'll only upvote guides that truly deserve it.
  • Most of the times I won't even vote on your guide at all if I feel like it isn't there just yet. If you haven't gotten a vote, don't worry! Keep in mind that at times I do revisit guides that i've previously reviewed. This means, if you've been able to improve your guide more from the last time I saw it, I might end up giving it an upvote in the end if I feel like your points have gone up.
  • I try to stick by never downvoting any guides. You've spent hours on writing your guide, and you’re coming to me to ask for help. Not only would me downvoting your guide be very rude and disrespectful but, it wouldn't help your guide in becoming better at all! I sincerely ask you to remain respectful about the whole thing though meaningly, don't act like a complete 10 year old. If you don’t like what I've said, feel free to tell me why, otherwise I expect a change to come using some of the things that I've said from my review on your guide.

Template
If you'd like your guide reviewed by me, please follow the template down below:

Champion: [example, Ahri]
Link to Guide: [paste the link to the guide here]
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: [Could be anything]
Anything Else That I Should Know: [simply said, anything else]

Copy & Paste template in the spoiler down below.

Review Request Copy & Paste Template


Final Notes
Also as a last note, if you found that my review was able to help you in improving your guide, then feel free to throw me a +rep or check out my guides; While I really love helping out other people on this site, it's ultimately those things that motivate me to continue reviewing people's guides. It serves as an incredibly small indicator that the time and effort I put into my comments is being recognized and appreciated by others.

There's no need for you to take any offenses against my reviews or attack me in any way, if you don't like the points that I make then that's fine, you do you. The whole purpose of me writing these reviews is to help you, not to point out all of the possible reasons as to why your guide is incredibly bad and not worth my time, not at all. If I can't try to help you in improving your guide, then what's the point of coming here, right? At the same time, I don't want requests from people that generally doesn't care at all about wanting to improve their guides or anything, go away, I'd rather spend my time reviewing guides for people that want them.

The entire purpose of having this review service in the first place is to make Mobafire a better place. Together, you, me & all others that might come and ask for a review can together make Mobafire a better place for everyone, with amazing guides for all the champions in the game, positive comments, positivity spread towards everyone, and a better environment for anyone that might lurk around wanting to join in.


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Champion: Skarner
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fear-my-sting-jungle-skarner-9-19-545138
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:


Anything Else That I Should Know: Since my Hecarim guide shares similarities with my Skarner guide, I'll probably be applying the feedback I get to both of the guides.

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Done! :)

Thanks to Jovy for the Sig :)
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Champion: None, it's a general guide
Link to guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-table-coding-guide-560056
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: My brain probably got fried by tables and I need to know whether the thing actually makes sense and if there are spelling/grammer mistakes :^)
Anything else that I should know: Can't think of anything
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Review Complete!

Thanks to Jovy for the Sig :)
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Champion:Kayn
Link to Guide:https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-22-kayn-the-child-is-gone-the-killer-will-remain-548177
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:I want advices in upgrading my guide
Anything Else That I Should Know: I dont think there is something special in my guide
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Champion:Kayn
Link to Guide:https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-22-kayn-the-child-is-gone-the-killer-will-remain-548177
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:I want advices in upgrading my guide
Anything Else That I Should Know: I dont think there is something special in my guide


I'll try and do this one tomorrow, can't at all today if that's fine. @ Holidayuniverse

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Champion: Senna
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/senna-the-redeemer-561145
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'm new to guide-making and would really appreciate some feedback to hear what areas I'm currently lacking in, what I'm missing and if present "too much" of something.
Anything Else That I Should Know: You have a rule against newly published guides, I'm unsure of how "new" something has to be to qualify for that, it's been out since the 6th but I've been putting quite a lot of work into it since with no plan on stopping.
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Champion: Senna
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/senna-the-redeemer-561145
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'm new to guide-making and would really appreciate some feedback to hear what areas I'm currently lacking in, what I'm missing and if present "too much" of something.
Anything Else That I Should Know: You have a rule against newly published guides, I'm unsure of how "new" something has to be to qualify for that, it's been out since the 6th but I've been putting quite a lot of work into it since with no plan on stopping.


I can do yours once patch 9.23 hits considering it's a guide on a new champion & some of your content is still not there since you're waiting for the new patch. Hopefully that's okay. @ TheBlueImperial

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Fruxo wrote:


I can do yours once patch 9.23 hits considering it's a guide on a new champion & some of your content is still not there since you're waiting for the new patch. Hopefully that's okay. @ TheBlueImperial


Sounds good to me, thank you.
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