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Creator: Fruxo July 14, 2019 4:37pm
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Champion:Kayn
Link to Guide:https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-22-kayn-the-child-is-gone-the-killer-will-remain-548177
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:I want advices in upgrading my guide
Anything Else That I Should Know: I dont think there is something special in my guide


Your review will be a bit delayed, hopefully that's fine. @ Holidayuniverse
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This is a 5 months guide but my very first one. Planning to start making more so...
Here: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-actioners-sona-support-high-diamond-550095

Thanks in advance! :)
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Champion: Fiora
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/one-step-ahead-fiora-top-557828
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I want to see how the guide has improved the last time you saw it.
Anything Else That I Should Know: Hope that you like the guide!
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Champion: Teemo
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-the-guide-to-teemo-e-will-soon-be-fixed-456667
Why I'd like to be reviewed: Because I am always steadily finding new ways to add more and more information to the guide. However, it's getting to a point where I think I just can't add any more information. So I'm hoping that it looks good, the spoilers that I have make it more tidy and optional if people want to learn even more about Teemo instead of looking at a massive wall of text like it used to be. But overall I really just want to know how it looks so that I can further improve it.
Anything Else That I Should Know: It's a lot of Detail, so most people Who don't play Teemo may deam it "unnecessary" to have much information at all, but I went into every minor detail, do you think this wise?
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Actioner wrote:
This is a 5 months guide but my very first one. Planning to start making more so...
Here: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-actioners-sona-support-high-diamond-550095

Thanks in advance! :)

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Champion: Fiora
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/one-step-ahead-fiora-top-557828
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I want to see how the guide has improved the last time you saw it.
Anything Else That I Should Know: Hope that you like the guide!

Champion: Teemo
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-the-guide-to-teemo-e-will-soon-be-fixed-456667
Why I'd like to be reviewed: Because I am always steadily finding new ways to add more and more information to the guide. However, it's getting to a point where I think I just can't add any more information. So I'm hoping that it looks good, the spoilers that I have make it more tidy and optional if people want to learn even more about Teemo instead of looking at a massive wall of text like it used to be. But overall I really just want to know how it looks so that I can further improve it.
Anything Else That I Should Know: It's a lot of Detail, so most people Who don't play Teemo may deam it "unnecessary" to have much information at all, but I went into every minor detail, do you think this wise?


I'll try to do all of these a bit later on! Just be patient with me. :) @ Actioner @ chrisorion @ Sovereign Kitten
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Champion: The Green Father himself, Ivern

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Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would love for my guide to be reviewed because I am currently trying to make one for Ivern as most of the guides that are already on the site have not been updated in a while. I am also in love with the champion itself and would love for other people to find Ivern very interesting after reading my guide. With this review, I will be able to fix up some of my big mistakes and improve my guide for new or returning Ivern players who want to read it.

Anything Else That I Should Know: This guide is a HUGE work in progress as you can probably see. I haven't really gone back and read through what I have written so the grammar is quite bad at this point (my English isn't that good). Thank you if you review my guide and for the opportunity.
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Champion: Pyke

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Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would really like my guide to be reviewed because im "remaking" my guide right now and using new BBCode and new Information about Pyke. Also, I just want to improve everything as fast and good as I can x) and I think its way better go get a review which is more because of the points you are giving than only a feedback like : "Yea, its good but" so I can see what I can improve.. Thank you Fruxo and dont worry if you need your time - take your time for it! x)

Sink´em all! ~Pykë
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Champion: Amumu
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/2020-deathmu-tank-amp-ap-detailed-matchups-531668
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would like to improve my guide but am really unsure of what to do so any feedback you have, I would very much appreciate :) Have an excess of time some days so would rather spend it doing things like this.
Anything Else That I Should Know: No rush! I'd just like for you to do this so I can know what to improve on... I am currently working on synergies, so...
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All of the previous guides should have their reviews done. ^-^

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Champion: The Green Father himself, Ivern

Link to Guide

Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would love for my guide to be reviewed because I am currently trying to make one for Ivern as most of the guides that are already on the site have not been updated in a while. I am also in love with the champion itself and would love for other people to find Ivern very interesting after reading my guide. With this review, I will be able to fix up some of my big mistakes and improve my guide for new or returning Ivern players who want to read it.

Anything Else That I Should Know: This guide is a HUGE work in progress as you can probably see. I haven't really gone back and read through what I have written so the grammar is quite bad at this point (my English isn't that good). Thank you if you review my guide and for the opportunity.


I need to know if your guide is ready for a review, considering I quickly checked through it and it seems like you're working on matchups so there are a lot of things in the guide without any information. Maybe it'd be a bit better if I wait a little bit with it and focus on some other guides until that's done or what do you think? @ Dark0asls

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Champion: Pyke

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Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would really like my guide to be reviewed because im "remaking" my guide right now and using new BBCode and new Information about Pyke. Also, I just want to improve everything as fast and good as I can x) and I think its way better go get a review which is more because of the points you are giving than only a feedback like : "Yea, its good but" so I can see what I can improve.. Thank you Fruxo and dont worry if you need your time - take your time for it! x)

Sink´em all! ~Pykë


If your guide is completely ready for a review then please let me know and I can get it started real soon! Sorry for being a little bit absent when it comes to reviews but just bear with me. @ DasGrauen_

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Champion: Amumu
Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/2020-deathmu-tank-amp-ap-detailed-matchups-531668
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would like to improve my guide but am really unsure of what to do so any feedback you have, I would very much appreciate :) Have an excess of time some days so would rather spend it doing things like this.
Anything Else That I Should Know: No rush! I'd just like for you to do this so I can know what to improve on... I am currently working on synergies, so...


I would also like to know if your guide is ready for a review too, so that I can start thinking about it. It seems like it is from the quick glance I checked on the guide but I want to just double check again since you did say that you're working on synergies. @ ak521
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Current List of Reviews to do is as follow:

@ TheBlueImperial:
Review for: Senna & Galio

@ Dark0asls:
Review for: Ivern

@ DasGrauen_:
Review for: Pyke

@ ak521:
Review for: Amumu
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