Fruxo's Guide Review Service

[quote=Fruxo][quote=Holidayuniverse]Champion:Kayn Link to Guide:https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-22-kayn-the-child-is-gone-the-killer-will-remain-548177 Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:I want advices in upgrading my guide Anything Else That I Should Know: I dont think there is something special in my guide[/quote] Your review will be a bit delayed, hopefully that's fine. [mention=Holidayuniverse][/quote]

[quote=Actioner]This is a 5 months guide but my very first one. Planning to start making more so... Here: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-actioners-sona-support-high-diamond-550095 Thanks in advance! :)[/quote]

[quote=Sovereign Kitten]Champion: Teemo Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-the-guide-to-teemo-e-will-soon-be-fixed-456667 Why I'd like to be reviewed: Because I am always steadily finding new ways to add more and more information to the guide. However, it's getting to a point where I think I just can't add any more information. So I'm hoping that it looks good, the spoilers that I have make it more tidy and optional if people want to learn even more about Teemo instead of looking at a massive wall of text like it used to be. But overall I really just want to know how it looks so that I can further improve it. Anything Else That I Should Know: It's a lot of Detail, so most people Who don't play Teemo may deam it "unnecessary" to have much information at all, but I went into every minor detail, do you think this wise?[/quote]

[quote=Fruxo][quote=Actioner]This is a 5 months guide but my very first one. Planning to start making more so... Here: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-actioners-sona-support-high-diamond-550095 Thanks in advance! :)[/quote] [quote=chrisorion]Champion: Fiora Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/one-step-ahead-fiora-top-557828 Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I want to see how the guide has improved the last time you saw it. Anything Else That I Should Know: Hope that you like the guide![/quote] [quote=Sovereign Kitten]Champion: Teemo Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/9-23-the-guide-to-teemo-e-will-soon-be-fixed-456667 Why I'd like to be reviewed: Because I am always steadily finding new ways to add more and more information to the guide. However, it's getting to a point where I think I just can't add any more information. So I'm hoping that it looks good, the spoilers that I have make it more tidy and optional if people want to learn even more about Teemo instead of looking at a massive wall of text like it used to be. But overall I really just want to know how it looks so that I can further improve it. Anything Else That I Should Know: It's a lot of Detail, so most people Who don't play Teemo may deam it "unnecessary" to have much information at all, but I went into every minor detail, do you think this wise?[/quote] I'll try to do all of these a bit later on! Just be patient with me. :) [mention=Actioner] [mention=chrisorion] [mention=Sovereign Kitten][/quote]

[quote=Dark0asls][u]Champion[/u]: The Green Father himself, [[ivern]] [url=https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s10-preseason-the-green-father-560536]Link to Guide[/url] [u]Why I'd like this to be Reviewed[/u]: I would love for my guide to be reviewed because I am currently trying to make one for [[ivern]] as most of the guides that are already on the site have not been updated in a while. I am also in love with the champion itself and would love for other people to find [[ivern]] very interesting after reading my guide. With this review, I will be able to fix up some of my big mistakes and improve my guide for new or returning [[ivern]] players who want to read it. [u]Anything Else That I Should Know:[/u] This guide is a [b]HUGE[/b] work in progress as you can probably see. I haven't really gone back and read through what I have written so the grammar is quite bad at this point (my English isn't that good). Thank you if you review my guide and for the opportunity.[/quote]

[quote=DasGrauen_][b]Champion:[/b] [[Pyke]] [url=https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/pyk-top-midlane-guide-s9-24-did-i-support-right-u-542118]Link to my Guide[/url] [b]Why [color=#808080]I'd like this to be Reviewed[/color][/b]: I would really like my guide to be reviewed because im "remaking" my guide right now and using new [color=#808080]BBCode[/color] and new Information about [[Pyke]]. Also, I just want to improve everything as fast and good as I can x) and I think its way better go get a review which is more because of the points you are giving than only a feedback like [color=#808080]: "Yea, its good but" so I can see what I can improve..[/color] Thank you Fruxo and dont worry if you need your time - take your time for it! x) Sink´em all! ~Pykë[/quote]

[quote=ak521]Champion: [[Amumu]] Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/2020-deathmu-tank-amp-ap-detailed-matchups-531668 Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would like to improve my guide but am really unsure of what to do so any feedback you have, I would very much appreciate :) Have an excess of time some days so would rather spend it doing things like this. Anything Else That I Should Know: No rush! I'd just like for you to do this so I can know what to improve on... I am currently working on synergies, so...[/quote]

[quote=Fruxo]All of the previous guides should have their reviews done. ^-^ [quote=Dark0asls][u]Champion[/u]: The Green Father himself, [[ivern]] [url=https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s10-preseason-the-green-father-560536]Link to Guide[/url] [u]Why I'd like this to be Reviewed[/u]: I would love for my guide to be reviewed because I am currently trying to make one for [[ivern]] as most of the guides that are already on the site have not been updated in a while. I am also in love with the champion itself and would love for other people to find [[ivern]] very interesting after reading my guide. With this review, I will be able to fix up some of my big mistakes and improve my guide for new or returning [[ivern]] players who want to read it. [u]Anything Else That I Should Know:[/u] This guide is a [b]HUGE[/b] work in progress as you can probably see. I haven't really gone back and read through what I have written so the grammar is quite bad at this point (my English isn't that good). Thank you if you review my guide and for the opportunity.[/quote] I need to know if your guide is ready for a review, considering I quickly checked through it and it seems like you're working on matchups so there are a lot of things in the guide without any information. Maybe it'd be a bit better if I wait a little bit with it and focus on some other guides until that's done or what do you think? [mention=Dark0asls] [quote=DasGrauen_][b]Champion:[/b] [[Pyke]] [url=https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/pyk-top-midlane-guide-s9-24-did-i-support-right-u-542118]Link to my Guide[/url] [b]Why [color=#808080]I'd like this to be Reviewed[/color][/b]: I would really like my guide to be reviewed because im "remaking" my guide right now and using new [color=#808080]BBCode[/color] and new Information about [[Pyke]]. Also, I just want to improve everything as fast and good as I can x) and I think its way better go get a review which is more because of the points you are giving than only a feedback like [color=#808080]: "Yea, its good but" so I can see what I can improve..[/color] Thank you Fruxo and dont worry if you need your time - take your time for it! x) Sink´em all! ~Pykë[/quote] If your guide is completely ready for a review then please let me know and I can get it started real soon! Sorry for being a little bit absent when it comes to reviews but just bear with me. [mention=DasGrauen_] [quote=ak521]Champion: [[Amumu]] Link to Guide: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/2020-deathmu-tank-amp-ap-detailed-matchups-531668 Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I would like to improve my guide but am really unsure of what to do so any feedback you have, I would very much appreciate :) Have an excess of time some days so would rather spend it doing things like this. Anything Else That I Should Know: No rush! I'd just like for you to do this so I can know what to improve on... I am currently working on synergies, so...[/quote] I would also like to know if your guide is ready for a review too, so that I can start thinking about it. It seems like it is from the quick glance I checked on the guide but I want to just double check again since you did say that you're working on synergies. [mention=ak521][/quote]

[quote=Fruxo]Current List of Reviews to do is as follow: [mention=TheBlueImperial]: Review for: [[Senna]] & [[Galio]] [mention=Dark0asls]: Review for: [[Ivern]] [mention=DasGrauen_]: Review for: [[Pyke]] [mention=ak521]: Review for: [[Amumu]][/quote]

[quote=ak521][quote=Fruxo]Current List of Reviews to do is as follow: [mention=TheBlueImperial]: Review for: [[Senna]] & [[Galio]] [mention=Dark0asls]: Review for: [[Ivern]] [mention=DasGrauen_]: Review for: [[Pyke]] [mention=ak521]: Review for: [[Amumu]][/quote] Hey @Fruxo, I just finished the synergies today and updated the guide. (https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/2020-deathmu-tank-amp-ap-detailed-matchups-531668) Thanks, ak521[/quote]