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Creator: IceCreamy March 14, 2012 3:52pm
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Hey hey hey, it's summer-break and I wanted to revamp my Annie guide (would be #1 if I re-publish it now) and I wanted someone to proof read (not so much grammatically, but more if it stands to reason). Because I revamped only passages of my guide and left others as they were, it's a little messy. I revised most of my "mistakes", but I would feel more comfortable if someone would proof-read it for me. (Its long (!))

Sooooo, here are some cookies:
Now I only need to know how I can give you my guide w/o publishing it...any ideas? maybe if you add "?revision" to the URL?

Geetz, neo :3
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3 ways:

1. You grant me access to your account
2. You publish the guide
3. You give me the entire text via PM, email, Skype, whatever.

Take your pick ;)

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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IceCreamy wrote:

Sure is :D

Will get to your requests tomorrow as I am so sleepy atm, I can't give any good advice.


As promised, I'm done :)

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Thx a lot for the review!! +rep
Thanks to jhoijhoi for the sig!

If you like Shen check out my currently #1 guide on Shen!

If you need a Review feel free to PM and I'll do it as soon as possible!
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Wrote you a message 6 days ago...still no response. Did you actually got it ? :O :D
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Where what when? :o

If you PMed me I might have ignored it, if you wrote on my review shop I apologize deeply!

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Added the changes ;)
If I could help you +rep me ;)

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Thnx for the review and I'm working on coding on my other monitor. :)
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Thanks a lot for your review,

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Thanks for the review! You got a +1,+rep, and a post here from me. Most of the stuff you complained about has been elaborated on and/or fixed. I got some ideas for improvements, might ask for a re-review later.

Did I help you? Do you feel nice today? Take a look at my guide,I would really appreciate it.

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