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Reviews R'US: Will read your guide!

Creator: Nighthawk July 30, 2011 11:04am

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Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Looking for an expert opinion. I don't want to make the guide too bloated but I'm stumped as to possible improvements.
What I'd like you to focus on: The guide. Ive posted more then enough proof that the build works so Im not asking for help on that.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-crit-updated-8-13-11-99504
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Palthios wrote:

Looking for an expert opinion.

Lol. Sorry, you won't find that here :p
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Guide For (champion): Master Yi
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: You already reviewed it. But i want, that you list it also here^^.
What I'd like you to focus on: ^^
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/quot-final-quot-yi-king-of-jungle-104375
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Searz wrote:


Lol. Sorry, you won't find that here :p


If people want to come here and get an opinion from me, a non high elo player, they are free to do so. I would appreciate it if you just stopped posting off topic things like that in my thread. No where in my thread do I say i'm a pro, i'm high elo or that I don't just suck terribly.

If I make a bad statement, I don't need you to correct me. Your not my mother (I hope).


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Review my Guides please!
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LoL Guides wrote:

Review my Guides please!


Hmm, Hmmmm...

read first page pls.
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At least put in in the format...


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Hello nighthawk, im back and now with 100+ posts seeming i did not meet these reqs previous time but if you would like to review my guide now i would really be happy.

so here i go.
Guide For (champion): Skarner,The crystal vanguard
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:I want to know if i wrote a proper guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: My writing style,The guide+build itself.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sirspankalots-way-of-spanking-with-skarner-jungle-112315

thanks in advance!
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner
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Guide For: Warwick
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: My first guide, and I'd like to get serious about it because I feel I have a lot of knowledge to share so I wan't to refine the craft.
What I'd like you to focus on: I know that I have some large walls of text that might be un appealing so maybe a way to fix that, any spelling grammatical errors or really anything you think I could improve on at all
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/comprehensive-lanewick-guide-113750

Thanks a lot!
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For everyone who still has a guide needing to be reviewed, please just wait. :D

I don't get much time to review guides, in about a month (more or less) I should be relatively ok with reviewing more guides, however just right now...I don't have the time.

I will attempt to over the next while, just give you a soft review, some quick skimming of the guide. It won't be in the format I use, but hopefully it will be better then nothing ^^

When I get more time i'll give you guiz better reviews.


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