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Reviews R'US: Will read your guide!

Creator: Nighthawk July 30, 2011 11:04am

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Nighthawk wrote:

Congrats on the sticky-

oh wait, this is my review thread, ****, I better get working.


Congratz man ;)

Take your time, it's not like the guides will run away ;)
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Guide for Amumu the Sad Mummy
Why I'll like this to be reviewed : I want to help more people :D And in the same time frame get some rep :P
What I'll like you to focus on : Dunno, anything you like :)
Guide link : In my descript, the Amumu one :D (The rest is also possible, but I didn't format them yet)
Amumu Guide :D

Eve guide :D

Hope whatever I say helps! :D

PS : Not all my criticism is good. Most of the time, I just talk like that anyway. So forgive me if you get offended, unless you just can't look from my angle, or at least close enough.
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Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: General publicity that comes along with guides being reviewed on popular threads (What? At least I'm honest.) Also, always looking for opinions and criticism that can help improve my guide!
What I'd like you to focus on: Nothing in specific, skim it over, tell me what you like, tell me what you don't like. You know the drill, eh?
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/stranger-dangers-master-of-metal-100056
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Jarvan guide up.

EDIT: Vlad Guide up.
Edit2: Ashe guide up
Edit3: Akali Guide up
Edit4: Soraka guide up
Edit5: Yi Guide Up


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Guide For:Gragass
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want best guide on site!!!1!!
What I'd like you to focus on: writing within the guide, ability to understand
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gragas-the-jack-of-all-trades-86691
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Guide for : Wukong
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: My first guide and no one has commented or voted :(
What I'd like you to focus on: Mostly item build but could you look at every thing else
Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-see-my-huge-stick-106428
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Guide For (champion):Rumble!
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:For constructive criticism,guidance,and an overall opinion XD.
What I'd like you to focus on:Mostly the organization and typical guide layout,but the actual build and stuff would be really nice.
Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rumble-im-on-a-boat-110860
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yeah so I review 6 guides, come back and now I find 3 more guides waiting for me. Y U GUIZ SPAM SO MUCH?????

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Thanks for your review :) Here's my reply.

Nighthawk wrote:
Not sure why you have CDR runes. It only really helps with your ult and Volley, which is on a low enough cdr already...instead try using Mana/Mana per level glyphs and switching your seals, armor say.

Mana Seals > Mana Glyphs. Ashe's ult cooldown is over a minute now without runes. Need the cooldown, as it's a great initiator.

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15/0/15 is...bad lol. Your going pretty well completely offensive, so you should go full offense, or if you still want those cdr runes, instead just go 21 in utility and 9 in offense.

o.O It really isn't. I'm grabbing all the useful stuff in the offense tree, and the useful stuff in the utility. Havoc isn't good enough to spend 21 points into.

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Maybe keep your zeal and finish your LW earlier. I've never really liked PD to much tbh...alternatively (and probably better) is to get IE, Zeal, BT, LW, PD, BV

Phantom Dancer synergises so well with Ashe that anyone who says it doesn't is silly :) However, I see where you're coming from, adding in an earlier BT.

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I would recommend getting Black Cleaver over LW, it gives you more AS, more AD and it helps you with your job more. Killing enemies. I believe Black Cleaver > LW until around 112 or so armor, which most squishies won't hit until late game, if at all. I would only get it (Last Whisper) if a) their team is full of tanky dps or b) their tanky dps is giving you tons of trouble. And if you go Stark's + BC instead of a PD + LW it's better until about 165 armor. This is also why I consider an Ashe who goes BT + BC + Stark's + BT + BV a viable option, you hit for a ton with your volley. You also lifesteal more, although you do hit for a bit more if you crit. IF.

Black Cleaver vs Last Whisper

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Your max survival build should look like this: Boots > IE > Frozen Mallet > Atma's > BV > BC

lol, I like it. Would change it though, to drop the BC and get something with health.

Quoted:
I suggest testing out Malady on your high armour build, probably won't work well since the item is **** but it theoretically look's pretty good with madred's. Also test SotD?

I've only put in viable items. No one buys SotD, or Malady.

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I would almost never recommend bloodrazor unless your planning to go proc ashe because you don't have an ap carry or something.

Proc Ashe? Madred's isn't about proc'ing...

Thanks again for the review :)

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