What more should I include in my guide?

[quote=TheMcDanee]Hi, I'm currently working on a guide for jungle [[malphite]], and I'm wondering what I should add. I've added the following things: Intro Lore Pros / Cons Runes Skills Skill sequence Where you can use your ult Masteries Items Optional Items I will be adding jungle route, where to ward, counter list, and when to and when not to pick him, but I feel that I need more. Thanks in advance[/quote]

[quote=IceCreamy]Remove the lore Put masteries right after or before runes Other than that the info looks good to me, if you include the stuff you said you will :P[/quote]

[quote=Zell]Team-fights section. Just a run down of what your tasks and priorities should be during a team-fight.[/quote]

[quote=TheMcDanee]I think I'll remove the lore and add a teamfight section, counter jungle section, and move the masteries like you said. Thanks for the help. Think I will be crediting you in the credits ;)[/quote]

[quote=Totallynotn00b]If you wanted to be thorough, you could add a section on ganking itself - I.e, what to look out for, (escapes, etc) what lanes need priority ganking (I.e, morde), stuff like that.[/quote]

[quote=IceCreamy]Hmm, can't believe I missed that stuff lol. I feel bad now :P[/quote]

[quote=A Chubby Baby]champion matchups section. this always helps. get some reviewers to review your guide too. they will help a lot.[/quote]

[quote=Mowen]I like putting the Runes / Masteries sections at the end of the guide since most people can figure out your reasoning just by looking at the build, and Item explanation / Situational Item explanations are more important for someone to read first. Just my personal preference though. Agree with others about taking out the Lore and putting in a matchup section. Matchup sections usually impress me and are very helpful.[/quote]

[quote=Skycosis][quote=TheMcDanee] Hi, I'm currently working on a guide for jungle [[malphite]], and I'm wondering what I should add. I've added the following things: Intro Lore Pros / Cons Runes Skills Skill sequence Where you can use your ult Masteries Items Optional Items I will be adding jungle route, where to ward, counter list, and when to and when not to pick him, but I feel that I need more. Thanks in advance [/quote] I bet if you recorded your games and added commentary then it would make your guides a lot better. Make like one or two each one discussing behaviors and how to build against certain opponents if they're giving you trouble.[/quote]