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What more should I include in my guide?

Creator: TheMcDanee June 9, 2012 3:06pm
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Hi, I'm currently working on a guide for jungle Malphite, and I'm wondering what I should add.
I've added the following things:

Intro
Lore
Pros / Cons
Runes
Skills
Skill sequence
Where you can use your ult
Masteries
Items
Optional Items

I will be adding jungle route, where to ward, counter list, and when to and when not to pick him, but I feel that I need more.

Thanks in advance
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Remove the lore

Put masteries right after or before runes

Other than that the info looks good to me, if you include the stuff you said you will :P

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Team-fights section. Just a run down of what your tasks and priorities should be during a team-fight.
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I think I'll remove the lore and add a teamfight section, counter jungle section, and move the masteries like you said. Thanks for the help.

Think I will be crediting you in the credits ;)
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If you wanted to be thorough, you could add a section on ganking itself - I.e, what to look out for, (escapes, etc) what lanes need priority ganking (I.e, morde), stuff like that.
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Hmm, can't believe I missed that stuff lol. I feel bad now :P

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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champion matchups section. this always helps. get some reviewers to review your guide too. they will help a lot.
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I like putting the Runes / Masteries sections at the end of the guide since most people can figure out your reasoning just by looking at the build, and Item explanation / Situational Item explanations are more important for someone to read first. Just my personal preference though.

Agree with others about taking out the Lore and putting in a matchup section. Matchup sections usually impress me and are very helpful.
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TheMcDanee wrote:

Hi, I'm currently working on a guide for jungle Malphite, and I'm wondering what I should add.
I've added the following things:

Intro
Lore
Pros / Cons
Runes
Skills
Skill sequence
Where you can use your ult
Masteries
Items
Optional Items

I will be adding jungle route, where to ward, counter list, and when to and when not to pick him, but I feel that I need more.

Thanks in advance



I bet if you recorded your games and added commentary then it would make your guides a lot better. Make like one or two each one discussing behaviors and how to build against certain opponents if they're giving you trouble.

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