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-1 for trying to disgrace another persons build because theirs as you say are better than yours and so that you don't compete against it you -1 them
1) This is only "Fresh". Shows me you haven't updated it in a while.
2) No need to list all the Elixirs.
3) I'd suggest
4) 9/21 seems an odd choice for a caster, even though he doesn't have mana you can still spec decently in the Utility tree.
5) Put the Lore at the bottom, or delete it.
6) BBCode for masteries.
7) No need to have items on separate lines. ie:
vs
8) Center all large icons and all images.
9) No need to repeat those images again and again?
10) Summoner Spells before Items.
11) No ability explanations?
12) No gameplay chapter?
I personally prefer
Take the score screenshot out of your introduction. Adding evidence of your own success does very little to impress the reader, and even less so when it's a mediocre score (for a screenshot anyway). Right now it just makes people like me roll their eyes when they see it.
You're not going to get an upvote out of me considering the brevity of this guide. However, I do hope to hear back from you and perhaps see a change or two based on what I've said. Good luck with your guide.
The guide, however, which is the important part (anyone could make a build -.-) is ****py. Not well put together. Check out jhoijhoi's guide about making guides for pro tips.
-1. Message me if you decide to improve and I don't at all mind changing my vote.