My (ATTEMPT) at a guide!

[quote=DaZzLRaZzL]Hey if you are reading this, thanks! Made my 1st ever guide after playing LOL for just 2 months. After finding the builds and advice on MOBAfire so very helpful for a new player! So in an attempt to emulate my betters.... I've tried making my own! Was really hoping for some good advice/constructive critisim on my Build/Guide! Many Thanks Daz ps. might be helpful to put a link.... http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ryze-no-i-wont-f-ing-die-121834[/quote]

[quote=Symphunny]i think this is advertising and not allowed o.o if you have a question related to your guide, ask a specific question (: (i would build a RoAs before your second catalyst)[/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]Yes it is considered advertising. BTW, the build is bad. Not because of the items but, the skill order is terrible. You can't skill like that.[/quote]

[quote=DaZzLRaZzL]thanks for looking. what would you change about the skill order?[/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]Well... you can't 6 points in spell flux simply because that's how the game works. You've only been playing for 2 months or so, yes? Try doing that skill order ingame. It doesn't work. Try something more like this: [abilities=qweqerqeqerqewwrww champion=ryze] That's not perfect skilling but, it is obtainable and is just personal preference.[/quote]

[quote=DaZzLRaZzL]aha i think it was just a typo. im not a complete idiot i promise! let me fix it!ty![/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]Sorry to be the one who says this, but don't try making a guide until you actually have hit a level above 20, so you know what you're actually talking about :/[/quote]

[quote=xLiqur]Hey man glad to see you have an interest in making guides!! Listen to jhoi!! She is the guide queen here!! Keep it up man! ps. you could use a little more experience ;) add me if you have any questions IGN:xLiqur[/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard][quote=jhoijhoi] Sorry to be the one who says this, but don't try making a guide until you actually have hit a level above 20, so you know what you're actually talking about :/ [/quote] He's lvl 26..... I'll just say, look back at your guide after you've played a bunch of games as a lvl 30. You may find you want to make some changes. Also, your personal success with the build contributes absolutely no value to your guide. I suggest you remove the image of your match history in this case, since you haven't even hit 30. That's great that the build works for you, but you don't know at all how it works with the full runes and masteries, nor do you play against high-level opponents yet. Posting your stats doesn't really mean anything, and just makes people like me roll my eyes. Just a suggestion of course.[/quote]

[quote=Searz]Well.. Could someone please lock this already? >.> Advertising is not allowed..[/quote]