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Sir Spank's Review thread of Spank

Creator: SirSpankAlot November 6, 2011 2:53am
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Champion of Guide you would like Reviewed: Nasus
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Have recently added two new sections I haven't received any feedback on, though any extra feedback on the rest of the guide would be appreciated as well.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything! (but mainly my new sections, Jungling and Matchups)
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nasus-whys-this-tank-hitting-me-for-half-my-health-107987
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Did the reviews. Have fun with your increased ratings.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!

Check out my guide on Skarner, The Crystal Vanguard(press the sig)!
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I would like some Re-Reviews if you please

Guide:Shyvana; Shadow of the Dragon

Guide:Katarina: Playing with Knives

Guide:Buildign Your own way


You don't have to comment on them again just edit your review post. Thanks
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^it's better that he comments again. Leaving the original posts there shows you have improved your guide due to feedback.

I'm watching this thread SirSpank, I may have to ask for a review just to keep you busy :P
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Kazega use the format! Well I guess i can review em cuz I got like 0-customers :X.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!

Check out my guide on Skarner, The Crystal Vanguard
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Kazega use the format! Well I guess i can review em cuz I got like 0-customers :X.

But MOOOOOOOOOoooooooooom..... I have three guides here. Do I really have to?

lol thanks anyway ;)
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Champion of Guide you would like Reviewed: Shyvana
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'd like more feedback on my guide and my current style. Of using literature, format, lay-out & explanation methods. I'd also like a whole-package review due to the fact that it's my first guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: Repetetiveness, literature style, format, lay-out. Of course, I'd like a full review, but those are the four things I'm interested in most at the moment.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shyvana-jungling-and-solo-drakes-145666
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Did your review. Awesome guide dude!
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner
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Thanks for the awesome compliments, bro. I really needed that to cheer this ****ty day up (Two D's in a row for a test I had no idea was coming due to the fact taht I've been sick for two weeks in the hospital. -.-)

Anyways, thanks for the review, I'll message you or you can check the comments section for my reply there as well.
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Post Count (at time of request): 55
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Champion of Guide you would like Reviewed: Sona
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I updated it recently.
What I'd like you to focus on: If you yourself don't ever play supports or have rarely played Sona, some places where I could clarify or expand would be useful.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-wall-of-text-about-supporting-as-sona-130139
hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.

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