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Throughout the days of our dreary lives, there comes a point in time each day when we’re plagued by the unwanted feeling of boredom. I believe that video games are a creative way to escape the clutches of boredom. Ever since I was four years old, I have found my self playing video games. And even to this day I still play video games a lot and I don't plan on stopping. I soon hope that this hobby will turn into an amazing career. Through Video games, people will be able to escape the boredom of their every day lives and have a creative way of enjoying themselves a little more.
I began playing Video games when I was four years old. I always enjoyed playing the world's first, First Person Shooter, Doom. Going through the game required quite a bit of hand-eye coordination and "Skill" and it was fun testing your self on those aspects. I also enjoyed less violent games like Castlevania or Mega man, in which the platforming aspect always annoyed me since you had to begin from he start if you fell down. I was very bored as a child, so I took gaming as a hobby to entertain my self in those boring times.
I continue to play games now. I Currently play games like the "MOBA" League of legends and The "MMORPG" Guild Wars 2. Which game I play is decided by how I feel. So when im in the mood for a strategy game I play League of Legends and when I'm in the mood for an aesthetically pleasing action filled game, I play Guild wars 2. I like both games and find that playing these games has been a very good way of entertaining my self.
this belief is going to affect anyone. I wouldn't force video games on people either. If a person finds sports more fun, I'm not going to make them play games. The way I do hope to make an influence is by making this hobby into a business. As a game designer I will be able to communicate new ideas and invent new and innovative things that will change the way people think of games and maybe even the world in general. By following what I like to do each day and making it into my career, I will be able to continue to enjoy what I like doing but also have an influence on the entire world as I make innovation in the gaming industry.
Games have always been a good way of going past the boredom of life. Through games i have been able to go past this my entire like and i hope to influence people through it when i grow up. I grew up with gaming and it has made me into a person who likes gaming today. I play games today and i have a lot of fun doing it. I hope to soon make an impact on the gaming industry through games i make my self. Games have been with me all my life and will stay with me for the rest of my life and i will always look to them when ever im bored and need something fun to do.
Throughout the days of our dreary lives, there comes a point in time each day when we’re plagued by the unwanted feeling of boredom. I believe that video games are a creative way to escape the clutches of boredom. Ever since I was four years old, I have found my self playing video games. And even to this day I still play video games a lot and I don't plan on stopping. I soon hope that this hobby will turn into an amazing career. Through Video games, people will be able to escape the boredom of their every day lives and have a creative way of enjoying themselves a little more.
I began playing Video games when I was four years old. I always enjoyed playing the world's first, First Person Shooter, Doom. Going through the game required quite a bit of hand-eye coordination and "Skill" and it was fun testing your self on those aspects. I also enjoyed less violent games like Castlevania or Mega man, in which the platforming aspect always annoyed me since you had to begin from he start if you fell down. I was very bored as a child, so I took gaming as a hobby to entertain my self in those boring times.
I continue to play games now. I Currently play games like the "MOBA" League of legends and The "MMORPG" Guild Wars 2. Which game I play is decided by how I feel. So when im in the mood for a strategy game I play League of Legends and when I'm in the mood for an aesthetically pleasing action filled game, I play Guild wars 2. I like both games and find that playing these games has been a very good way of entertaining my self.
this belief is going to affect anyone. I wouldn't force video games on people either. If a person finds sports more fun, I'm not going to make them play games. The way I do hope to make an influence is by making this hobby into a business. As a game designer I will be able to communicate new ideas and invent new and innovative things that will change the way people think of games and maybe even the world in general. By following what I like to do each day and making it into my career, I will be able to continue to enjoy what I like doing but also have an influence on the entire world as I make innovation in the gaming industry.
Games have always been a good way of going past the boredom of life. Through games i have been able to go past this my entire like and i hope to influence people through it when i grow up. I grew up with gaming and it has made me into a person who likes gaming today. I play games today and i have a lot of fun doing it. I hope to soon make an impact on the gaming industry through games i make my self. Games have been with me all my life and will stay with me for the rest of my life and i will always look to them when ever im bored and need something fun to do.
on 10 different forums from several dozen people even though the teacher provided 3 essays to make it easier?
Facepalm
Forget it
I only asked the people here since i knew a lot of you were in college
It wasn't the dynamics of the poem that were the problem
i only wanted criticism on structure and writing stuff like that
to make it look and sound good