I changed my vote :)
You actually made some chanes and i think you deserves the like! Kepp working on the build :)!

adding on to what DarkAkumaLord had to say. Someone may know a lot about the game they are trying to teach people about, but they may not be able to play at higher level's, think about coaching a sport like football most of the time they are unable to play like the people they are training, meaning someone with little experience in league of legends, example a prelevel 30 could have the potential to write the best guide possible if they do their home work, watch pro players read other builds read up on everything possible about their champion and watch several hours of pro streaming etc, and then know just about everything there is to know the champion they are writing their guide about. I was level 26 when I wrote my first guide it's archived right now while I make improvements on it. Overall first guides are always the hardest to write but you get better at it the more you work at it, no guide is ever complete you just need to keep polishing it over and over again

Eh... ADC TF DOES work but really? You might have to do everything the people BEFORE me said.
And lagger lower levels do not ALWAYS (just usually) mean that the guides sux altogether.
I mean my garen guide was written at like lvl 20ish (which i subsequently ditched due to me working on two NEW guides at this very moment).

Sorry but I have to do this, just keep playing and writing and your next guide could be really good

One thing I noticed... Infinity Edge gives AD, not AS, but overall a good guide.

Instant -1 for you.

Well, I actually did read the guide. Others have already told you why it's bad.

so.. first of all, I think you should work on that guide. Take a good look at other ones and redo it! For example, in the item section all you do is explain the effect of the item, which pretty much every player lv 30 knows already. The community prefers reasons WHY you choose that item and WHEN to take it. For example saying why you get Banshee's Veil over a Mercurial Scimitar would be interesting. Apart from that, you should get some defensive runes otherwise you will be shut down hard by bursty opponents such as Graves. Add a Taric or Leona and you will be crying.
I would get Greater Seal of Armor and Greater Glyph of Magic Resist. Get the magic resistance for lane opponents such as Ezreal or Corki whose damage is mostly magic in the first bunch of levels.
downvoted. Your information is not useful for anyone but people completely new to the game and for them there are way better guides out there.
I'd still like to play with you - if you'd want of course - my IGN is 2FastForYouGuys on EUW.
cheers,
Gretel

Try to avoid tons of smileys :) Please :)
I have never seen a person wink THIS much!
You also write buying Infinity Edge gives you attack speed. Last time I checked, IE didnt give attack speed but attack damage.

(And the final chapter, about farming, is ehm... super worthless.)

.... I cant really say anything that hasnt already been said.

.... I cant really say anything that hasnt already been said.

Just stick around here on mobafire and keep working hard, your skills will improve if you stick around, but your build isn't bad, but it's not complete just keep playing with TF and by the time you are level 30 you will have more to write about in you guide

I like how you got the Phantom Dancer first. Then the Infinity Edge. And then the Bloodthirster last.