The part on the left is dark blue. You could try putting your name in a plain light color (no stroke, no glow, no shadow) somewhere on the left? Then you have a dark patch w/a lighter/white focal point, instead of the image heavily weighted toward the right w/both Janna + the text?
(A corner or edge is also always a good cop out place to stick text.)
(A corner or edge is also always a good cop out place to stick text.)
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The_Nameless_Bard wrote:
I feel like the text isn't quite right on it. :/
I feel the text is a bit far away and makes my eyes go from the text and focal and back again. You could try placing it on the right. Maybe just above her shoulder :/ Still looks pretty awesome though, really like the broken text.
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If you wanna you can also make a clipping mask over the text so you'd get a nicer color. Control + Shift + E (in photoshop) and then Control Alt G that layer over the text layer. Move the layer around so that Janna's hair goes over where it says Janitsu. I think that'll make it look ever better.
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