EdisonKhoo's Review Shop

[quote=EdisonKhoo][center][img=http://i.imgur.com/gfjMZ7H.png][/center] [font=georgia]Greetings ladies and gentlemen, I am starting a review shop. I will use [url=http://www.mobafire.com/profile/meiyjhe-295571]Meiyjhe[/url]'s schemes and I got his permission to use them. If you didn't mention what type of review you want me to use, then I'll use the Sins and Blessings type.[/font] [font=georgia][color=#0080ff][u][i]Template for asking a Review[/i][/u][/color] Summoner Level: Champion: About your guide: Have you read jhoijhoi's [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506]Making a Guide[/url]?(Yes/No): Type of Review: Link to your guide: [u][color=#0080ff][b]Paths you will get[/b][/color][/u] [color=#ff0000]Path of Exile[/color] No more hope. You will get a negative vote when following this path. [color=#ff0000]Path of the Infidel[/color] Means you did a very bad job. You should either archive your guide, or drastically change everything. You will get a negative vote when following this path. [color=#ff0000]Path of Redemption[/color] The guide was disappointing, but there might still be some hope. You will get a negative vote when following this path. [color=#ffff00]Path of the Student[/color] It was a decent guide and there is a noticable potential. You will get no vote when following this path. [color=#00ff00]Path of the Teacher[/color] Your guide was good enough to make the reader learn the champion better. There is still a lot to improve, but it was good enough. You will get a positive vote when following this path. [color=#00ff00]Path of the Successor[/color] You did a good job. There are some things that still can improve, but it is not affecting the quality of your guide. You will get a positive vote when following this path. [color=#00ff00]Path of the Saint[/color] You did an amazing job, and I have barely any complaints about the guide. The complaints that are there, will be very minor. You can be really proud of yourself and you will get a positive vote when following this path. [u][b][color=#0080ff]Review Types[/color][/b][/u][/font] [spoiler=Sins and Blessings] [color=#ff0000]Thy sins[/color] 1. [color=#00ff00]Thy blessing[/color] 1. [color=#0080ff]Result:[/color] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Billy] [color=#0080ff]Cheatsheet: /20[/color][rule] [color=#808000]/10 item picks + structure[/color] [color=#808000]/10 the rest[/color] [color=#0080ff]Structure + coding: /15[/color] [rule] [color=#808000]/10 uses of overviews, schemes and other uses of structure[/color] [color=#808000]/5 uses of coding[/color] [color=#0080ff]Content: /50[/color] [rule] [color=#808000]/25 Full Build Quality Explanation[/color] [color=#808000]/20 Tactical Quality Explanation[/color] [color=#808000]/5 Quantity content[/color] [color=#0080ff]Bonus: /15[/color] [rule] [color=#808000]/5 bonus chapters (matchups and synergy chapters)[/color] [color=#808000]/5 Originality[/color] [color=#808000]/5 attitude towards the readers (wants to improve)[/color] [color=#808000]0/0 Comment to vote[/color] [color=#ff8000]Result:[/color] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Super Quick Review(can't came up with any good names)] I will only just state out the things need to be change, add or remove in your guide and I will vote and give you a path. [/spoiler] [font=georgia]If you wonder what you have to do in return for my review, you will not have to do anything. I don't ask you to review my own guides, to give me +rep or whatever, it is completely free. Just tell me whether is my review useful or not, I'll be very happy if it helps you. ^^ [font=georgia]If you have anything to ask or any complaints, feel free to post down below or PM me so I can help you with it. ~EdisonKhoo[/font][/quote]

[quote=Graypozo]first (?) You have already reviewed my guide, but can you do it again when I update it? It will change drastically :D (also tell meiyjhe to do it please :P). Ill let you know when its updated on a PM if youd like :3 (Dont check it yet, still under construction :P) Good Luck with your review shop![/quote]

[quote=NateDog13]Think you'd be down to review mine :D? Summoner Level: 30 Champion: Yasuo About Your Guide: Still in progress, but the bulk of it has been finished for around 2-3 weeks and is currently being edited and read over for mistakes. (I'm also working on navigability currently, so it may be a bit.... rough) Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes Type of Review: Billy Link to your Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-wind-is-pushing-me-encyclopedia-of-yasuo-363591[/quote]

[quote=EdisonKhoo]@Graypozo Ok, tell me if you are done updating your guide. Well if you want meiyjhe to rereview your guide, leave a comment in his review shop or pm him. :3 @NateDog13 ok, I will do it as soon as possible :3[/quote]

[quote=EdisonKhoo][quote=NateDog13] Think you'd be down to review mine :D? Summoner Level: 30 Champion: Yasuo About Your Guide: Still in progress, but the bulk of it has been finished for around 2-3 weeks and is currently being edited and read over for mistakes. (I'm also working on navigability currently, so it may be a bit.... rough) Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes Type of Review: Billy Link to your Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-wind-is-pushing-me-encyclopedia-of-yasuo-363591 [/quote] Done :D[/quote]

[quote=NateDog13][quote=EdisonKhoo] [quote=NateDog13] Think you'd be down to review mine :D? Summoner Level: 30 Champion: Yasuo About Your Guide: Still in progress, but the bulk of it has been finished for around 2-3 weeks and is currently being edited and read over for mistakes. (I'm also working on navigability currently, so it may be a bit.... rough) Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes Type of Review: Billy Link to your Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-wind-is-pushing-me-encyclopedia-of-yasuo-363591 [/quote] Done :D [/quote] Put a reply in my comments section, if you could take a look that would be great z.z[/quote]

[quote=Joxuu]30, [[lucian]], guide done (ignore wrong banners, fixing soon), you can use the format you like more. http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s4-lucian-the-purifier-372805[/quote]

[quote=extradelicious]Summoner Level:30 Champion: Jarvan IV About your guide: You will learn about the manifest destiny more than you learn about Jarvan IV: proven by Mowen. Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes I read it. Did I understand it? =/ im sort of dumb. Type of Review: sins/blessings Link to your guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jarvan-iv-top-lane-guide-350350[/quote]

[quote=EdisonKhoo][quote=Joxuu] 30, [[lucian]], guide done (ignore wrong banners, fixing soon), you can use the format you like more. http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s4-lucian-the-purifier-372805 [/quote] Done [quote=extradelicious] Summoner Level:30 Champion: Jarvan IV About your guide: You will learn about the manifest destiny more than you learn about Jarvan IV: proven by Mowen. Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes I read it. Did I understand it? =/ im sort of dumb. Type of Review: sins/blessings Link to your guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jarvan-iv-top-lane-guide-350350 [/quote] And done ^^[/quote]

[quote=Joxuu]Thank you for the review :9 Gave ya +rep for your time.[/quote]