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Creator: EdisonKhoo February 28, 2014 8:37am
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Greetings ladies and gentlemen, I am starting a review shop. I will use Meiyjhe's schemes and I got his permission to use them. If you didn't mention what type of review you want me to use, then I'll use the Sins and Blessings type.


Template for asking a Review


Summoner Level:
Champion:
About your guide:
Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No):
Type of Review:
Link to your guide:



Paths you will get

Path of Exile
No more hope. You will get a negative vote when following this path.

Path of the Infidel
Means you did a very bad job. You should either archive your guide, or drastically change everything. You will get a negative vote when following this path.

Path of Redemption
The guide was disappointing, but there might still be some hope. You will get a negative vote when following this path.

Path of the Student
It was a decent guide and there is a noticable potential. You will get no vote when following this path.

Path of the Teacher
Your guide was good enough to make the reader learn the champion better. There is still a lot to improve, but it was good enough. You will get a positive vote when following this path.

Path of the Successor
You did a good job. There are some things that still can improve, but it is not affecting the quality of your guide. You will get a positive vote when following this path.

Path of the Saint
You did an amazing job, and I have barely any complaints about the guide. The complaints that are there, will be very minor. You can be really proud of yourself and you will get a positive vote when following this path.



Review Types

Sins and Blessings


Billy


Super Quick Review(can't came up with any good names)



If you wonder what you have to do in return for my review, you will not have to do anything. I don't ask you to review my own guides, to give me +rep or whatever, it is completely free. Just tell me whether is my review useful or not, I'll be very happy if it helps you. ^^

If you have anything to ask or any complaints, feel free to post down below or PM me so I can help you with it.

~EdisonKhoo
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first (?)

You have already reviewed my guide, but can you do it again when I update it? It will change drastically :D (also tell meiyjhe to do it please :P).

Ill let you know when its updated on a PM if youd like :3

(Dont check it yet, still under construction :P)


Good Luck with your review shop!
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Think you'd be down to review mine :D?

Summoner Level: 30
Champion: Yasuo
About Your Guide: Still in progress, but the bulk of it has been finished for around 2-3 weeks and is currently being edited and read over for mistakes. (I'm also working on navigability currently, so it may be a bit.... rough)
Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes
Type of Review: Billy
Link to your Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-wind-is-pushing-me-encyclopedia-of-yasuo-363591
-Check out my Lucian Guide (Click the Picture above, 4 Current Builds)!-

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@Graypozo

Ok, tell me if you are done updating your guide. Well if you want meiyjhe to rereview your guide, leave a comment in his review shop or pm him. :3

@NateDog13

ok, I will do it as soon as possible :3
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NateDog13 wrote:

Think you'd be down to review mine :D?

Summoner Level: 30
Champion: Yasuo
About Your Guide: Still in progress, but the bulk of it has been finished for around 2-3 weeks and is currently being edited and read over for mistakes. (I'm also working on navigability currently, so it may be a bit.... rough)
Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes
Type of Review: Billy
Link to your Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-wind-is-pushing-me-encyclopedia-of-yasuo-363591


Done :D
My Review Shop
Thanks to IPodPulse for this sig, check out his Signature Shop here ^^
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EdisonKhoo wrote:



Done :D


Put a reply in my comments section, if you could take a look that would be great z.z
-Check out my Yasuo Guide (Click the Picture above, 4 Current Builds)!-
-Honorable Mention In The Mobafire S4 Guide Contest!-

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30, Lucian, guide done (ignore wrong banners, fixing soon), you can use the format you like more.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s4-lucian-the-purifier-372805

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Summoner Level:30
Champion: Jarvan IV
About your guide: You will learn about the manifest destiny more than you learn about Jarvan IV: proven by Mowen.
Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes I read it. Did I understand it? =/ im sort of dumb.
Type of Review: sins/blessings
Link to your guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jarvan-iv-top-lane-guide-350350
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Joxuu wrote:

30, Lucian, guide done (ignore wrong banners, fixing soon), you can use the format you like more.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s4-lucian-the-purifier-372805


Done



Summoner Level:30
Champion: Jarvan IV
About your guide: You will learn about the manifest destiny more than you learn about Jarvan IV: proven by Mowen.
Have you read jhoijhoi's Making a Guide?(Yes/No): Yes I read it. Did I understand it? =/ im sort of dumb.
Type of Review: sins/blessings
Link to your guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jarvan-iv-top-lane-guide-350350


And done ^^
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Thank you for the review :9
Gave ya +rep for your time.

"A person giving you advice isn't perfect and has their own shortcomings but they may give you the piece that you're missing."
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