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You mention that the Conqueror rune page (for Darkin Rhaast) is your personal favorite, how come? What reason would make that specific page be better than the shadow assassin version or any other potential rune page for that matter?

Another thing that would be smart to point out is your other rune choices apart from the keystones. Like I mentioned before, instead of having “my personal favorite” in the notes, mention why you would pick Legend: Tenacity. Why would Domination fit in together with Conq and how come Taste of Blood & Ravenous Hunter are the best choices in that rune tree to go for as secondary runes? Do you get what I’m trying to lead to here? Same thing applies for the shadow assassin rune page, mention a bit more (but not way too much, try to keep it concise) about your rune choices.

As for summoner spells, I personally think that saying “except for x and a few others” is kinda useless, that won’t really help your readers all that much. Just keep it short and simple, along the lines of “Flash and Smite is mandatory for all junglers.”

When it comes to items, I like how it’s formatted, but I can say the same thing here. Put in some more notes, when should I opt for the oneshot shadow assassin build & when would the “experimental burst” build be better? If I were to go Rhaast, when should I opt for the burst, sustain or even the tankier build during my games, currently they are just builds and they don’t show a clear way of saying “hey, go this build for this purpose and this one for this” etc.

As a quick grammar correction, you’re saying “Assasin”, but it’s spelled as “Assassin”, just to let you know.

Ability Order: I like the one you have, but I’ve seen some people playing Kayn and still sticking with the original Q max instead of the new W max, maybe it might be worth putting in an ability order featuring the Q max as well, just to have it there. Also ordering them from most common > less common, in this case Q max > W max, but that decision can be yours.

The Threats/Synergies. I feel like you can get a lot more detailed about this section (Or just make a new section inside of your guide dedicated to matchups where you talk about them & remove this one at the top). There are more jungle matchups then just 10. :) I think it’ll help you a ton when you just play a ton of Kayn, realise his matchups and how to reliably beat them, in some way or another, which will definitely come with experience.

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Skill Sequence

If I were to say myself, it would be a lot easier for me to understand why I should be going for a W max if you explained a bit more about it. What is it good for? Why? etc. (For the skilling sequence by the way).

Currently you just have the coding and all for the sequence, but how are we (the readers) supposed to know why we even go this in the first place, and not something else, why just this specific skill sequence.


Abilities

As for here, you’re currently just explaining again about the tooltips for each ability, readers won’t have any use of that as it’s again, already explained if they hover over the tooltip.

Instead, try to explain to your readers how this ability is useful during the game. An example of this is but not limited to: “
Kayn’s E is really useful to have as you can freely get around the map thanks to its ability to go through walls. This will essentially make invading a lot easier as well if you’re able to get ahead early on.”


Stuff that weren't mentioned in the guide

One of the insane and MAJOR things I saw that just isn’t here, is the items. I would really recommend to make another section where you talk about the possible items that you can go on Kayn along with his 2 forms, which items are better on this form and which ones are better on the other form? You already have this ready and done for the cheatsheet part, but you can do a much better job if you explain a bit more to your readers, why those items?

Gameplay section, would be really good to have. One tip I could advise is to make a new section called again “Gameplay” where you put in the jungle routes into said section. Together with that, there are many many more things that I feel like you can talk about. This applies both to Kayn but also to the Jungle role itself.

Some useful topics I can think of on the top of my head are but not limited to:

• Rhaast, what’s his playstyle, how do you properly play him, there’s so much you can talk about with this particular form.
• Shadow Assassin, how do you use this form? What’s your playstyle, who’s your main targets etc. etc.
• The normal version, without a form. What should be your priorities in this form and as an add-on, should you greed for ganks to get your form or take it slower and go for secure ganks for example?
• Phases of the game. What do you do on Kayn during the Early- Mid- & Late game? There’s bound to be a lot of useful stuff for these.
• Teamfights, what should I (the kayn player) do during those fights? Who’s my most primary target (squishies, the adc, supports etc. etc.).
• Putting in about the jungle routes for this new section as I mentioned, you already got these.
• Talking about Invading and/or counter jungling, some very important aspects of a jungler, especially more for someone like Kayn.
• Maybe you can talk about the jungle plants? what can you use them for and how can they be an advantage for you specifically.
• Objectives? Dragons, Heralds, Baron, Scuttle, Turrets and so forth, what to do and what’s my priorities?
• Warding could come into this, since you have the ability to ward around the entire map.
• Lane priority could be a good topic.
• Ganking, what to I do when I want to gank a lane?

I feel like with Kayn being such a unique champion as he’s basically 3 champions made into one, there’s so much potential stuff that you can talk about with him (or as of how I understand of the champion).

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You do have some spelling errors that I can see, and that alone can impact how readers see your guide. Of course, english might not be the language for everyone and some people might be worse at it, but I would advise to try and make it a bit more grammatically correct if you get what I mean. One thing I can recommend is to take your texts onto a google document and/or Word for example and just see how many grammatical errors you can find.

Some of the things I noticed in grammar while reading your guide are but not limited to:

• spelling I (as in me) with a small letter (they should always be capitalized).
• not finishing some words (like “bec” instead of “because”)
• ur instead of proper ones like your
• u instead of a proper one like you
• other grammatical errors of words that aren’t words like “ttheir”
• some stuff aren’t correctly bbcoded
• forgetting apostrophes (like don’t and they’re) but not actually needed, just explaining.

I think that the more you play Kayn, the more you’ll experience. The more information you’re able to gather on your champion, the better you will be of explaining those. As of right now, I think you should just play a ton of him & try to get better while trying to realise what new possibilities you can do with the champion.

I can tell that you've put a lot of effort into this guide. It’s really nice and you should keep working & doing what you do.