This build is very good

As your first guide its not bad, keep it up, don't let the down votes bring you down. It's a great starting point, i like how you used a lot of the fancy stuff. As a suggestion try looking at other guides to see how they are organized and their design.
As a brand player myself, i was wondering what are your thoughts on the new Morello's tome, "Morellonomicon", cause i like to take it as my first item for what it offers.

It works really really fine, almost invincible if you can hold on a bit. Great one! =)

nice simple guide could be a bit more in depth but over all nice job

naice

i didnt say it was i said build it from the early game set the first time i go to buy i have enough for BW and tome

Void staff is NOT an early game item

This isn't a bad guide, and your final build is decent, but the guide is kinda short. What I'm missing right now is a matchup section, optional items, and a paragraph about your rune choice. You have added coding in your guide, but it looks somewhat messy at some points, especially in the items section. Hope this helped!