Please comment on if you like it or not and id gladly take notes on how to make it better :D thanks

i start off with the dagger so that the zeal is fairly cheap to buy. then i buy the graves for addition attack speed and movement speed, after that the phantom dancer allows you to catch those champions running about from you, by now you should be a good point in the game and can start increasing power the the B. F. sword. then the blood thirster just sets everything into place and you begin to do massive damage and life steal per shot. and now should be simple to farm minions for money and buy the next zeal. i buy a second phantom dancer for the speed bonus and the critical chance. and lastly for damage the B.F. Sword always helps make things go by faster so i buy that, then buy the infinity edge to maximize my crit damage. the thorn male is then in use to return a portion of damage dealt to you, thus aiding in killing you're enimie faster.

[Pros]
Fast movement
Fast attack speed
Life Steal
Reflected damage
great team battler
[Cons]
Low life
can't solo multiple champions
low mana regeneration

i take flash so that i you have to escape a gank, or you have to take that extra jump to get the kill.
I pick Ignite because it is a great way to finish someone off with out having to take the chance of getting killed at same time.

this is just a preferred mastery build for more damage and life stealing. armor penetration is nice to have so i max it out. also would like to max the amount of damage done. the attack speed wont make a whole lot of difference but its still nice. movement speed kinda explains itself.

it has mass damage and can regain life back fairly fast so that you don't have to constantly "b" back and heal up. just go kill some minions, also you're speed is normally the fastest in game so you can escape a fight easily when needed. in a team fight you drain life fast so its easier for everyone to kill people. also tanks are not a big problem. you drain their life and add it to you'res so that they dont have an easy time killing you.. (if they get lucky).