Thank you all for your amazingly nice feedback. I really enjoy reading these. :D

Health modifier quints? That's kind of odd; his squishy problems are all early game, and late game (with this build) you two healthy ap items. Flat health quints might be better.

And like they are saying, Jhoijhoi's guide for making guides is pretty indispensable.

Voted, i liked the way you explain your things , the build and runes are great too, i'm not much an clarity guy, but it work well too, good job.

if you have time check my mordekaiser guide-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ai9-C_TisPk&feature=related

See ya o/

Nice write up, exactly the same items I use to get with Brand, but not in the same order...

I usually start with the boot of speed + 3 heal pots, and then aim directly for catalyst. Once i got those 2 I full rush to my rabaddon's hat and then it all depends on the game, but if it last longer enough, I would end it very similar to ur build.

Also, agree with the prev comment, try to fill it with colours/references and more detail overall.

Keep the good work, +1 for the effort :)

+1 good start

now you really needa work on coding. for instructions, go to jhoijhoi's guide on making a guide. also think for your items section, you should split up explanations for each separate item. also add a section talking about situational items section.

keep up the good work!