Ok. Thanks.

Will archive this guide and fix the probs.

Thy sins
1. Your builds consists of 5 items in total, not alternative picks given at all in the cheatsheet.
2. Magic penetration glyphs + ability power seals
3. v2.0 chapter is useless, tell what it means in short in the introduction, or just remove it in total. And please change all the i's to I's
4. "I don't know what happen exactly,the lore didn't specify.
She probably fall on her head during one of those monkey bar thingy those gymnasts do, i mean, SHE'S A FREAKING BALLET DANCER!! NOT A KICK BOXER!! WHAT DID YOU EXPECT???" Do not put things in your guide you don't know.
5. "Even a robot needs to study Runes." Title makes no sense, or maybe too much sense. Either way, just keep the title short and powerful: Runes. This is also directed at your other titles, like: What does The Ball do? or the triple dot after spells.
6. "Teleport is a nice spell, it allows you to gank other lane faster than your mid opponent can call "MIA!!!"" You shouldn't take a summoner spell because it is "nice", you should take it because it is the best one out there for Orianna, and you did not explain why this is better than the other summoner spells.
7. Why do you keep your focus on 5 items in the item section, while one of them is not even a fully upgraded one? Explain Athene's unholy grail instead of chalice of harmony if you only discuss fully upgraded items. Just explain as much as you can. (Also: Do not let people consider taking Will of the Ancients nor Malady, because both items suck. Besides Malady gets removed soon anyway :P).
8. "Pick Orianna of course, that's why you're reading this right? sheesh.." ... I am not going to explain why this is a sin. The first 2 parts of your gameplay chapter is stupey anyway. Just remove dem.
9. And then you start talking about items... Shouldn't you have done that like... in the item chapter or something?

Thy blessing
1. "Okay" use of coding + structure.
2. Comment to vote
3. All basics included

Result: Path of Redemption
Change the titles asap, they are just rediculous.
Your guide atm overal has too much non-content. v2.0, Who is Orianna?, first 3 parts of the gameplay section, all of it can be removed or if you find necessary, moved to an other section.

Make sure you explain as much as you can about your build, because right now, both your cheatsheet as your guide is just incomplete when it comes to core items.

Overal, I think too much has to improve here, so I have to disappoint you.
At any rate, you got stuff to do.

Have fun :D

(Do not forget to vote! :D)

That's what I experience in sea yoloq sometimes, but not every player builds like a tard, though I would say that just today I saw two enemy jaxes I faced in top lane built guinsoos. Easy win for both games:p.

By my experience, SEA players tend to be particularly unintelligent about their item builds, in particular building doubles of unique effect items. My friend posted a screenshot of her victory and thought she was so pro til I screamed at her for building double Zephyr on MF.

Not everyone in SEA is like that.... its like assuming all americans are fat.

Because SEA are uneducated morons. At least Chawy sounded exactly like one during the interview. I rooted against SEA after that.

Nooo y u do this to SEA mobafire community and dampen our cred. You were like the only active SEA member then u do this :(

Cheat sheet already makes no sense, thanks for playing though.

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Bad runes.
Teleport isn't the best choice.
You promoted 2 of your previous guides which aren't successful, never do that.
You have a lore, another huge mistake, remove the lore.
Nobody gives a **** about your "partially drafted guides", remove that section aswell.
Bad skins isn't a good con.
Only talk about summoner spells that are viable OR SPLIT THEM UP under Viable and non viable. You've just listed them, make it clear. For a skim-reader, that looks like a recommendation to me.

Couldn't be bothered reading the rest of your guide, you didn't explain the basics of Orianna correctly and you didn't convince me to keep reading.

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I suppose your runes do make you squishy but I don't really see why they downvoted your guide just because of runes....

I personally really liked your guide. I've tried playing Orianna many times and have constantly failed at playing her (don't make fun of me, I'm only bronze). Your guide looks like it would be very helpful to me and all other people who are looking for some help at playing Ori. I really liked the WAY you wrote your guide, sort of laid (<---- oh jeese[<----is that spelled right...?]...please tell me I spelled that right...) back. There are a couple of suggestions I would give you on your guide technicalities though (I can't really argue with the build since I'm not really an Orianna player...):

1. Your spelling and capitalization needs a little bit of work. Just go through your guide and capitalize all those letters after periods and such. It may seem like a hassle to do but trust me, it will make your guide look much nicer and more organized. In my above paragraph, you can see how distracting spelling mistakes can be for me and readers.

2. Fix your minor coding mistakes. For example, in your "Debatable Items" section, your items are not completely lined up in a row. I think that jhoijhoi shows how to do this in her guide making guide so go look at that maybe and see if/how you can fix that. I think that the problem is just that you have to much text in one column and not the others which you can easily fix by adding invisible text.

Other than those two things, you seem to have a nice guide going. Keep up the nice work, PM me if you want me to come and take another look and maybe vote. :)