There are too many unnecessary information here. You should know that people come here to read a guide about Rammus, not about other stuff. You also need more info on Rammus (How do you play him, how to assist your team, etc.)

Lastly, you need to learn how to code to make your guide more attractive (Coding, color text, images, videos, etc.) Something like Powerball as a code, or this as a colored text. Refer to this guide to learn more.

I'll give you a +1 when you've improved.