thanks for advices! i appreciate your help!

Alright it is a great build, but here are some things to consider:

(1) The guide really lacks proper formatting, and it's very easy to fix all by looking at this guide
It will tell you everything you need to know about BB Coding overall making your guides appearance much better.

(2) This guide is currently lacking a lot of detail. I recommend looking at some of the other top rated guides to see how much info they include in it.

Hope I helped, and have a great day!

Good start there, but you need some more chapters like situational items :P
Also at the moment you have only icons. You can get explanation of the item in the icon by using this code (Replace { with [ to make it work) {icon=XXX size=50}
or this {{ITEM NAME}}

Like these



Guardian Angel

You can read more about coding from jhoihoi's how to make guide :P

I likem your guide and your build i just don't agree with the visage armor because you can do a Warmog's Armor or a Sunfire Aegis instead of doing that but +1