Thank you very much!The guide helped me a lot.(Please add teemo to the threads to lissandra:)

No Abyssal Mask rush as an option? It's far and away the strongest laning item on her vs APs, in combination with 2 Doran's Rings. Also it doesn't make any sense to get it as your last item- by that point, 20 flat pen is a lot less impactful.

I don't really understand getting Liandry's Torment, either. Haunting Guise if you're snowballing, sure- 15 pen is OP. But the upgrade, as a core item? You're a burst mage, not a DPS one. Your greatest strength is in locking down an opponent and blowing the living daylights out of them. Why would you want to build something that's essentially a poke/DoT mage's item?

I think her verry stronger top lane

I really thank you for supporting my Lissandra guide and keeping me going, appreciate your help :)

A big difference from the original Guide ^^

Little pic as motivation:
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Keep working on spelling and making it look nice. There are a lot of templates for guides here. If you want some fancy design though.

And at your masteries: Instead of the link I would put the picture there.

Alright, thanks! I'm going to check out the guide on how to make a guide and will do a new update in the next few days :)

I see you changed already alot but there is still room for improvement

First of all I would recommend reading jhoijhoi's "Making A Guide". Provides a lot of informations regarding coding and how to make your guide more appealing to readers. You should really take a look because it's so important on mobafire to know how to code.

You say your first language isn't english. Use either a spellchecker or ask someone who is good at writing english. The pronoun "I" is always written capitalized.

I would leave a line break between the headings of the Play style section (Looks less then a block).

In your Item section again, divide this into paragraphs xD I'm sorry... For example:
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Morellonomicon

I always buy morellonomicon as my first core item as it is overall a very cost efficient early game item for AP mages, its almost the same as athenes unholy grail but the advantage over athenes is that it provides more ability power and costs less gold. Also the disadvantages are that you have no magic resistance and less mana regeneration, in my opinion morellonomicon gives you enough mana regeneration and its way cheaper and very cost efficient for the amount of stats it gives to you.

And then going on...

As mentioned before, there's a lot of aesthetic parts of the guide that can be improved as well as formatting. Read up the BBC coding article for more formatting options. If you've had any experience with HTML in the past BBC coding is very similar.

I can also help you fix up your writing a bit if you like, just send me a PM.

Also, on a side note, I believe moving the points from Meditation to Butcher and Feast would be more beneficial. At 15 mins you generate 180 mana with Meditation but at 100 cs (which you should have by 15 mins) with Feast you generate 300 health + 100 mana.

If you need some help just send me a message :)

Alright, thanks for the feedback. As i said im new to Mobafire and this is my first guide but i will change these things as soon as possible :D

Dude, your item section is wall of text xD

I would recommend to divide this section into paragraphs. You write in a chronological order so you could call them starting item, Core items etc. or early, mid and late game items.

If you have two rune pages maybe show them and explain why these are better than XY rune.

Some people are new to lissandra. Consider using this Ice Shard instead of just calling Q. I don't know at who it's aimed for but if it's for beginners, this helps a lot to understand the context without always having to look up.

I think an champion ability section would be good with pictures and other stuff. Because her spells are very unique. Q shatters when hit by an enemy unit and does nice dmg and has then a longer range. New readers are interested in stuff like this and veterans want to know tricks and so.