Okay, hi, Johnny :)
Here's my point of view...

Overall guide evaluation:

Your guide is certainly good. It covers most of essentials for playing Lux. There is a huge room for adding different information about gameplay, but that only leaves you the room for expansion.

• Your runes/masteries are quite good. I wouldn't bother taking Havoc (it's only 15 bonus dmg per 1000 damage dealt). You should rather invest 3 points into Brute Force to make last-hitting easier.
• I think CDR runes are an overkill on Lux as you usually will have at least one CDR item, blue pot/blue buff + CDR from masteries. But it's fine as long as you don't go over 40%
  I would suggest building AP/Level or MR blues, depending on offensive/defensive playstyle.
• I doubt the viability of Doran's Ring start. Nowadays, every mid lane is very mobile and you almost always need boots to evade harassment and survive ganks. I'd suggest +3x start.

What I would suggest:

• There is a TON of stuff to add, honestly.
• Situational choices: runes/masteries/items. Very important.
• Laning section. Explain more in-depth how you should behave in lane.
• Champion matchups? I personally love seeing such sections :) If you need any help with that, you can address me for help, I'll gladly assist you.
• Talk about stealing stuff as Lux maybe? One of the easiest champ to steal blue with, imo... Don't even have to leave lane =P All at the cost of one sight ward.

What do you get from me?

• I'm not upvoting as of now. I like the guide, but I think it needs more work. If you add the things listed about, it's going to be pretty much complete.
• +rep for the effort ;) Good luck with making your guide better!

PM if you have any questions,
Alba :)

A good start, could use more gameplay info. Other than that, good job. Coding and build are all well and done. :)

Hey, it's a wall of text so you should fix it~

This is okay for a Lux build to start.

However: I sorta winced at the wall of text and almost decided not to read this. I'm sure others might not be thrilled to see a wall of text for such a good build order. I would recommend jhoijhoi's "Creating a Guide" found Here. Just read through it and it can help you make your guide look better. She has created many cool banners you can use. BB Code is also explained in her guide.


If you make it look less than a wall of text, I'm sure people will find this guide useful and would up-vote.

+1 Rep me if I helped :D