1. First of all, C2V. turn it on.
2. Runes, Skill sequence and Masteries are .... okay in general
3. Items are fine
4. It's very short. I mean, you have nothing like "Skill sequences" "Abilities" "Summary" or something
5.The guide lacks construction
7. You'll need a bottle of this I think.
8. I forgot number 6

Okay so right off the back, turn on C2V.

So let's criticize in the order that I see things:

-Thornmail is suggested as a standard build, but it's situational, just like Banshee's Veil.

-Locket, in my opinion, doesn't look too good on our Hecarim.

-Your standard build has no boots.

So I really don't feel like going any further on the cheat-sheet. What matters? The finished build or your favorite build? It's one or the other.

-I personally go Q-W-Q-E instead Q-W-E-Q in my leveling of spells and have little reason to believe the latter would ever work better.

-Masteries are wrong to a pretty obvious degree.

-Low ELO with a promise to rise fast with a defective build. This made me laugh. I want to make a guide too y'know? But I'm stuck in low ELO too. Follow my example and hold out until you're at least Gold.

-No BBCoding, the guide is hyper short, and the explanations are meager to say the least.

Final words:
I see little effort and a build that has not been tested, mainly because there is no way this could work. Better luck next time.
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