BlueMoba ty for yr guide to a guide it is very helpfull.

I know i can do a lot better but i think as my guide doesnt need color or pictures.

I think the most important is my Guide is what i want to explain, and what kind of tips i can add from readers to complete with.

TY

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Your guide is very hard to read and sometimes, it seems like you're just ranting about something (The Do Not Feed section for example). I know that English is not your native language but this was just brutal to read sometimes. Just write the guide in your native language. Finally, just go more in depth in your tactical or at the very least explain it since it's way too short to be a good tactical section.

Dammit, I already told you why.

Here's the set of Ten Commandments that you need:
jhoijhoi's Ten Commandments to making a guide