Bad points ure items no offense get offense first then defense I get the spirit visage but frozen heart big nono and you need optional items also I know ure new like me just throwing some ideas around also wriggles first would be good more sustain then bloodrazer and sorc boots warwick is mostly an on hit champ and by the time u get madreds in youre build its kinda worthless hes not a full tank hes tanky so get damage then survivablity youl have a tank on you're team just initate after him i feel once you make these changes youl make a better guide and alot more +1s and mybe one from me


goood points: but I like the chalice idea and youve taken aboard warwicks mana issues i like that about the guide pls also check my jarvan or morgana guide for how u can set guides out and jhios she rlly helped me just check her makeing a guide guide then youl b fine pls pm if you have further questions

thanks alot for the clarification on codes and the link. It really helped and now my guide looks somewhat good :D .

You can make codes like this

Jarvan IV

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506

easier than figuring things out.^

Thanks alot bro will do it ASAP

I'm fairly new to guide writing myself, but here is a big tip, when you want to have that cool link feature so viewers can simply hover over the item in your text to have the info pop up you simply put it in double brackets like this and if you spell the name of the item properly then Moba does the rest for u. Also if you like to change the color of the font there is a tool bar at the top of each chapter section.