Honest to god your composition isn't very good but I like the build all the same

This guide is very lacking.

For starters, the summoner choices are poor, itemization is also very bad. An item like Thornmail in core is problematic because more often than not it's a situational item. Additionally the explanations aren't very detailed or good

In short, this needs a lot of work not just to the layout but to the actual content of the guide