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Limited-time review thread

Creator: SirSpankAlot October 12, 2011 10:25am

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Well, if you don't mind checking some more of mine:

Spell/grammar check: Yes
Why would I like this to be reviewed? I would like to know how other people think about it, and how I can possible improve it.
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/caitlyn-fire-in-the-hole-113938

Spell/grammar check: Yes
Why would I like this to be reviewed?I would like to know how other people think about it, and how I can possible improve it.
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-blow-your-enemies-away-114075
NOTE: I am going to make the really big list again, the same as in my Lux guide. I'm going to do it for Janna only, not for Caitlyn. So no need on requesting it, I will! :)

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Spell/grammar check: No

Why would I like this to be reviewed? After a few months of waiting i would like to know where i can improve and what i can add

Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kayle-support-to-carry-118971
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Spell check: Yes
Grammar check: No, used my own, since I'm not so bad at English, but if there are grammar mistakes, then it must be a small amount.

Why would I like this to be reviewed? Somehow my guide went to a little stop with views, comments, and would like to move it up a bit. Also I would like to know what other people think about it, because I want to improve it.

Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/katarina-du-couteau-the-sinister-blade-124920

Note: I plan on updating it today, so it may be little changed in next few hours.
Thanks to JhoiJhoi for the sig
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Okay people , we're out of reviews....
HAHA I LIED , i'm extending it for 5 reviews!
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!

Check out my guide on Skarner, The Crystal Vanguard(press the sig)!
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Reviewed everythin guyz


Thanks a lot, will work on it later and will let you know when I'm done ^^

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Of course you will, Or else I will haunt your nightmares.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner
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Thanks for reviving my guide, while I was working on updating it, I used a bit of your "criticism" to correct few things. Don't like to color, cause too much makes eyes hurt (while reading fully colored guides i had this effect few times) but if I compare coloring in your Skarner Guide and mine I think you were right after all :P

Thanks a lot (+rep)
Thanks to JakofAllSpaydes for the sig
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Well thank you and you're welcome. I agree with not using too much color because it can be quite annoying. Anyways have a nice day.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!

Check out my guide on Skarner, The Crystal Vanguard(press the sig)!
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GUYZ THE NEW REVIEWING ROUND STARTED! 20 EXTRA REVIEWWWS:D
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner
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If possible review my Nocturne guide and Renekton guide please. :)

Spell/grammar check: Already did
Why would I like this to be reviewed? Because I want to improve my guides.
Link to guide: Bottom of my sig.

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