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Creator: OTGBionicArm September 22, 2013 7:53pm

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Hello, all. I'm OTGBionicArm, and once again I am offering my services as a guide reviewer.

It's simple and easy, just fill out this form in a comment;

Summoner Name/Level:
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Guide Link:

I will be grading the guide based on the following factors (keep in mind I will actually PLAY the champion using YOUR guide before writing my review):

Cheat Sheet: How clean it is, item paths/runes/masteries, how thorough it is. 1-10 points.

Legibility: How easy is the guide to read? Am I bored out of my mind? Is any of this information actually helpful? Could I have easily looked this up on the League wiki? Did I learn to play the champion as intended by the writer? 1-10 points.

Creativity: Is this build unique is some way? Is the playstyle unique? Does it actually work? I give bonus points for off-meta things if you truly convince me that it works (IE; support Mordekaiser probably will not fly, but AD Orianna might.) 1-10 points, 1-5 bonus points if your off-meta build convinces me it works.

Formatting and prettiness: I like nice looking guides. 1-5 points.

Attitude: I will grade you based on how you respond to other users feedback as well. Accepting feedback and looking to fix mistakes is a very big part of being a guide writer. 1-10 points.


Be aware that I'm obviously not amazing at every champion so I'll list the champions I am already decent/proficient with in each role;

Top: Aatrox, Cho'Gath, Darius, Gangplank, Garen, Jarvan IV, Nidalee, Quinn, Rengar, Shen, Trundle, Warwick, Wukong, Zac

Mid: Brand, Cho'Gath, Galio, Jayce, Kayle, Kha'Zix, Morgana, Swain, Talon, Varus, Viktor, Ziggs

ADC: Draven, Graves, Lucian, Varus

Jungle: Amumu, Cho'Gath, Hecarim, Nasus, Sejuani, Volibear, Warwick

Support: Sona, Taric, Thresh

I will put higher scrutiny on guides for these champions as I actually play them regularly. Everything else will be a learning experience for me.


Anyway, that's all, let the reviews come in. :3


EDIT: I can only do one review per day, due to the time consuming way I choose to do reviews. This is to ensure quality reviews. Sorry if you have to wait. :c
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+1 for actually attempting what the cheat sheet claims first before critiquing :)
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Thanks jhoi. I feel you can't really judge a guide until you actually try it, as written.
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Suggestion though, maybe order your champions through the roles Riot uses? Marksman etc? Then you won't get so much double-up.
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I don't play certain champions in their intended roles. I won't say I'm good at Marksman Quinn when I actually play her top lane and more like an assassin or bruiser. I guess I should make that distinction, but it matters little to the reviews.
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Summoner Name/Level: Junatsee 30
Champion: Sat... - Teemo!
Intended Role: Top
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/teemos-code-336848 here ya go sili boi<3




I will be grading the guide based on the following factors (keep in mind I will actually PLAY the champion using YOUR guide before writing my review):



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Thanks to OwenTheAwesomer for the signature =)
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Ah ****. I don goof'd.

Will have it done first chance I can tomorrow!
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First review completed.
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Oh I'm definitely going to make use of this when I release my Irelia guide soon :D
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Summoner name/level: XeresAce, lvl 30
Champion: Lissandra
Intended role: Ap carry, mid.
Link to the guide.

Because why not
Thanks to GrandmasterD for the sig!
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