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It helped me a lot in various ways.
Thank you so much!!!
Also, toughts on the current dark harvest compared to electrocute?
Oh and 10/10 build totally the kind of stuff this game needs
Regarding current runes, there is still a lot of testing going on by the Guide Team and so we currently do not have an answer. The guide will be updated at some point in the near future when we have come to some conclusions.
PS: It is not fun getting hit by a plane when farming sidelane. Pls stop doing that to me, ty.
have a nice day
winston’s formatting review service
Hey there!
Before I break down your sections, I’d like to let you know that you since you made banners, you can actually ditch the standard MOBAfire Table of Contents and make your own instead! Here's a step-by-step guide on how to go about doing that.
Okay, onto the more nitty-gritty stuff.
Introduction
Honestly, this section is a bit bland. It does get the job done, though. The links are super useful and the music is amazing (gotta love Riot sometimes). I would suggest, however, to add descriptions for your links so that your readers actually know what they’re clicking on.
Pros/Cons
Simple, yet informative. I like it.
Spells
Any informative guide is pretty much broken up into three parts: champion info (pros/cons, abilities, skill order), game info (meaning runes, masteries, spells, and items), and gameplay/tips and tricks/etc. I think it’s best to have it in that order; champion, game, gameplay/other stuff. That way, the first thing your reader learns about is whatever champion the guide is written for. By knowing all about the champion first (
Basically, group your sections so it goes Intro - Pros/Cons - Abilities - Runes/Masteries (whichever you feel should come first, they’re pretty much in the same boat) - Items - Laning/Jungling - Roaming - Common Mistakes - Conclusion - Change Log.
Sorry, back to the actual section. Again, it’s short but sweet. You’ve laid out the icons and text very cleanly. Good work!
Runes
Keeping it short and simple. Me gusta.
Masteries
I know the masteries for this build are already in the cheat sheet, but it’s very helpful, especially to newer readers/players, to explain what choices you’re making throughout the trees, not just the Keystones. Pictures would be really helpful, too.
Abilities
While what you have is actually really nicely coded, images or videos are always very nice to have in an abilities section. Luckily for you, the preseason minisite has .webm files for all of Quinn’s abilites. That means you can embed looping, HD videos, sound included, right into your guide! For example, here’s
Since this is quite a long post, quoting me for the code would be pretty tedious, so here’s the code for all of
Passive:
Q:
W:
E:
R:
Items
I LOVE the mini-cheatsheet at the top of this section. Short, simple, looks really good, and super creative to boot. Other than capitalizing your headers (like “Zeal Items” and “Good Items”), the formatting is practically flawless. I think this might my personal favorite section! :D
Laning/Jungling
Probably my second-favorite section. The pictures are really nice to make all the text a little easier on the eyes, though I’d love some in-game shots of team fights, laning, a jungle path, or a gank. Some coding would also help to make everything a little better to read. Still, your paragraph breaks make sense and distribute information well. I’m also a fan of the summary sections at the bottom of each sub-chapter. Well done!
Roaming
This is a fairly plain section, and could benefit from coding, like saying
Common Mistakes
I like this section - it’s kind of an extension from your tips in the Abilities section as well as from the Laning/Jungling section. Very helpful indeed. Again, though, it’s pretty plain; you’ve only got one link and no coding/pictures. Still, it’s in a bulleted list, so its readability is preserved.
One tip: Though the video is really useful, the text you use for the link is misleading; it should be something more like “Here is a good example of why you should save your E after ulting.”
Conclusion
Keeping with the theme of this guide, your conclusion is short, but sweet. I love the picture you put there, too. It’s actually my favorite out of all of the ones I’ve seen here. :)
I really enjoyed reading this guide. Its simple, clean format was enough to break up the text a little, yet without being overwhelming. That said, you could benefit a lot from further use of coding, which makes everything easier to read as well as making the experience more pleasurable. You also had a fair amount of typos/grammar mistakes, but none that made it so I couldn’t understand what you were trying to say.
your score (rounded up!):
Cheers!
Above is an excerpt from my morgana guide.
This is something that I do that I personally like. It links to a youtube video, but instead of putting text in the link, I put an image of the video's thumbnail. Using this, you can use the code
To effectively control the width of your youtube videos.
You requested a review in my review thread, but i'm going to hold off until you make some changes. It looks like winston's already given you some good ideas on how to start improving your guide.
Hope this helps!
Glad it works!