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Clarity
This is one of the most important parts of writing a guide because readers need to be able to understand what you're trying to say at a glance. The more clear, concise, and to the point your guide is, the more useful (and successful) it is going to be. Here are some of the issues I found with your guide's clarity.
BBCode Usage: You actually asked about this one at the end of your guide so I figured I'd help you out with it. The little pictures (which conveniently link to a related page) are generated using Mobafire's local bbcode script. If you want to learn how to use it properly you should refer to the BBCODE GUIDE listed on the "create a guide section" if you hover your mouse on the Builds & Guides tab from the home page. This guide gives a great explanation of everything bbcode (and is written by the fabulous Jhoijhoi) and you should definitely give it a good read. I know it seems overwhelming at first, but it's worth the time if you plan on being a big part of the community.
Content
So this is by far the most important part of your guide. If you have an amazing layout, and a very well written argument, but that argument sucks, you're out of luck. As you said yourself, the build probably doesn't work very well at higher levels of play (you're right by the way), but it's not because the right ideas aren't there. Here are some of the issues I have with your ideas and theory (keep in mind I have like 3000 ranked games and about 600 are at platinum tier, so some of the diamond players might give better strategic knowledge drops).
Closing
The last thing I want to talk with you about is the layout of your guide. While there is no "right" way to format your information here on Mobafire, there are a lot of good ways that people have done in the past. I recommend that you look at some of the top tier guides here on the site and take a few notes on how they organized their information. Look at the kind of chapters, the use of bbcode, whether or not they put in information about how they had a puppy that looked just like
Anyways I hope my guide review was helpful, and feel free to pm me, or to respond to this right here on your comments.
WELCOME TO THE FAMILY NATALIA!