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Warwick Build Guide by xxNataliaxx

Jungle Warwick Jungle

Jungle Warwick Jungle

Updated on August 28, 2014
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The Pink Poro (11) | August 24, 2014 3:19am
Hey Natalia, there's a few things I want to discuss with you about your guide. They are your clarity, and your content.

Clarity


This is one of the most important parts of writing a guide because readers need to be able to understand what you're trying to say at a glance. The more clear, concise, and to the point your guide is, the more useful (and successful) it is going to be. Here are some of the issues I found with your guide's clarity.
Spelling & Grammatical Errors: This is one of the big no-no's of guide writing. The easiest way to make sure your guide clearly presents your information is to proofread it. A guide is more or less an online essay, and people who are reading it are trying to find out how you think they should play a certain character. If you said, "your main goal in the game is to tank for your team," but you really meant to write gank, your readers might have some issues. I found 2 spelling errors (latter should be ladder, and looses should be loses), and one grammatical error (you wrote however without the proper succeeding comma) in your first paragraph. If English is not your first language, though I assume it is since you play on NA, then you may want to consult a more fluent friend for proofreading help. Additionally (whether or not English is your native language) Mobafire has a large number of writers who would be willing to help proofread your work before you post it, just drop a question on the main page and you should get at least one helpful response.
BBCode Usage: You actually asked about this one at the end of your guide so I figured I'd help you out with it. The little pictures (which conveniently link to a related page) are generated using Mobafire's local bbcode script. If you want to learn how to use it properly you should refer to the BBCODE GUIDE listed on the "create a guide section" if you hover your mouse on the Builds & Guides tab from the home page. This guide gives a great explanation of everything bbcode (and is written by the fabulous Jhoijhoi) and you should definitely give it a good read. I know it seems overwhelming at first, but it's worth the time if you plan on being a big part of the community.
If you take the time to sit down with someone (figuratively if you're doing it online, of course) and work through these issues your guide would communicate your ideas a lot more clearly.

Content


So this is by far the most important part of your guide. If you have an amazing layout, and a very well written argument, but that argument sucks, you're out of luck. As you said yourself, the build probably doesn't work very well at higher levels of play (you're right by the way), but it's not because the right ideas aren't there. Here are some of the issues I have with your ideas and theory (keep in mind I have like 3000 ranked games and about 600 are at platinum tier, so some of the diamond players might give better strategic knowledge drops).
Build & Set up: This is the meat and potatoes for any guide. You can get away with just dropping a solid cheatsheet (the top section of your guide that you don't have to actually write) and get a few thousand views.
runes

Items


Jungle Path & Game Plan



Closing


The last thing I want to talk with you about is the layout of your guide. While there is no "right" way to format your information here on Mobafire, there are a lot of good ways that people have done in the past. I recommend that you look at some of the top tier guides here on the site and take a few notes on how they organized their information. Look at the kind of chapters, the use of bbcode, whether or not they put in information about how they had a puppy that looked just like Warwick. Things like that. If you try to emulate some of the strong points of successful guides, and you do it well, your guide is probably going to become successful-ish too.

Anyways I hope my guide review was helpful, and feel free to pm me, or to respond to this right here on your comments.

WELCOME TO THE FAMILY NATALIA!
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