Veng Lmfao's Graphic Shop

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard]You misunderstand my meaning. I don't like it when I'm trying to find a render and someone has added an outer glow to one (for general use) to cover up edges that aren't as clean as they should be.[/quote]

[quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao]Ahhhhh........... Right on.[/quote]

[quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao][quote=Electro522]:D I like it! Bring on the intro![/quote] Made three, unhappy with all of them. Perhaps these will satisfy you, but I'm going to study now and I wanted to give these to you before I progress. [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/QyReqJl.png[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/8t6MJ5J.png[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/OzEFarv.png[/img][/center][/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]^All three are great and I'd certainly use them for guide banners if it was up to me! :)[/quote]

[quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao][quote=jhoijhoi]^All three are great and I'd certainly use them for guide banners if it was up to me! :)[/quote] Righto, what could I improve on?[/quote]

[quote=Electro522]Well done Veng! Im sorry the drawing gave you so much trouble. However, the simplicity of it makes somewhat........serene? And thanks for making the other two banners as well! I'll find a way to use them somehow. EDIT: If I may ask one thing, on the Snowstorm banner, could you add the text "Building the Battle Mistress", and on the warrior princess one, could you change the text to "Playing the Battle Mistress"? Its a simple fix.....right?[/quote]

[quote=The_Nameless_Bard][quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao][img]http://i.imgur.com/8t6MJ5J.png[/img][/quote]you should recolor the small bits of white in/around her hair to match the background if possible, it'll mesh better.[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao]Righto, what could I improve on?[/quote] Okay, didn't know you wanted criticism, but here goes. #1: It's a tad too dark/over saturated. You could probably apply a light gradient at low opacity to get the colours back. It also may be a little over-sharpened (see the crystals on Sivir's hat thing). #2: The different texts don't really seem to match. I think the last one if the best. There also seems to be a lot of empty space on the left. I'd make the text bigger to take up some more space, or add some splatter effects behind the render to add something to look at. #3: A common thing I've noticed is that you tend to have the subject reach the top and bottom of your canvas. In this case, Sivir's head is on top of the border, which I don't really like. Try lowering the opacity of the text, as at the moment it stands out a lot as the colours don't entirely match the rest of the sig. You could probably apply a gradient to the entire work and get the colours to match better that way, as opposed to fiddling separately with the text. But like I said, I would have been happy to use them without any of the above edits.[/quote]

[quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao][quote=jhoijhoi][quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao]Righto, what could I improve on?[/quote] Okay, didn't know you wanted criticism, but here goes. #1: It's a tad too dark/over saturated. You could probably apply a light gradient at low opacity to get the colours back. It also may be a little over-sharpened (see the crystals on Sivir's hat thing). #2: The different texts don't really seem to match. I think the last one if the best. There also seems to be a lot of empty space on the left. I'd make the text bigger to take up some more space, or add some splatter effects behind the render to add something to look at. #3: A common thing I've noticed is that you tend to have the subject reach the top and bottom of your canvas. In this case, Sivir's head is on top of the border, which I don't really like. Try lowering the opacity of the text, as at the moment it stands out a lot as the colours don't entirely match the rest of the sig. You could probably apply a gradient to the entire work and get the colours to match better that way, as opposed to fiddling separately with the text. But like I said, I would have been happy to use them without any of the above edits.[/quote] Thanks for the ideas, will definitely put them to use. [quote=Electro522]Well done Veng! Im sorry the drawing gave you so much trouble. However, the simplicity of it makes somewhat........serene? And thanks for making the other two banners as well! I'll find a way to use them somehow. EDIT: If I may ask one thing, on the Snowstorm banner, could you add the text "Building the Battle Mistress", and on the warrior princess one, could you change the text to "Playing the Battle Mistress"? Its a simple fix.....right?[/quote] I'll give it a shot :)[/quote]

[quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao]Ridiculously happy with these (especially the first one) [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/HThlL0T.png[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ywsu8d9.png[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zKeFn3c.png[/img][/center] Never tried anything like the first one, learnt a lot and I am very happy with the final result :)[/quote]