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Currently I can see that you mention Presence of Mind in your first rune tree. From my own experience, I’ve used Triumph a lot. It seems to be one of the most commonly used runes on Jhin as of right now according to stat sites, what’s your opinion on it and why would PoM be more beneficial than Triumph?

Would it be possible to opt for any other “Legend:” runes, for example Legend: Alacrity / Legend: Tenacity or will Bloodline be the general option to go for all the time? I’m talking more against specific team compositions and/or matchups in this case.

I would recommend to put in some notes in your rune trees for Fleet Footwork, Arcane Comet and Dark Harvest as people drifting by the guide looking for quick information will definitely be able to make use of that kind of information. Even if it’s really simple and just explains the main goal for each rune tree / keystone etc. You did well with this in your notes about Cleanse.

You do not mention any boots in your “Core crit build” of the item section here in the cheatsheet, in comparison to the lethality build / hybrid where you have them in for the build orders etc. You do mention Doran's Ring though it is not in the cheatsheet here so maybe it would be nice to add that in or add something about that into it maybe.

I like the well-organized items though, really good.

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Presentation wise, gorgeous, as I’ve already said multiple times before. It’s really well coded and so instead of talking about the graphics and that stuff, I will instead try to find some grammar errors and possibly other things along with it.

I love the moving Jhin banners though, really nice.

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Runes

Precision Primary + Sorcery Secondary

You mention Hail of Blades in your rune section though it is not in the cheat sheet nor do you have a tree that features that keystone. If such thing isn’t in the guide then the keystone should be removed altogether.

You only have a “*Tip” description in the Fleet description, maybe it could be beneficial to try and find some tips that can be used for the other runes in the tree ( Presence of Mind / Legend: Bloodline / Coup de Grace and the other runes you say that are good in that tree), this along with the other rune pages.

Again, Overheal is an option to go for but when. In what games will Overheal be of better use than PoM or Triumph.

You do a great job of explaining the secondary runes, though again they are only secondary options so it makes more sense to briefly explain those than to make an essay about it.

Sorcery Primary + Precision Secondary / Domination Primary + Sorcery Secondary

Again with the options of more tips and tricks of the runes & keystones for these pages as it’s kinda lacking in information. I can understand that though if it could become hard to talk about a page that is only ever attached to a specific build in question.


Items

In your description about the crit build “The FOURth and finally part”, should be final

I like that you explain the different builds you can go on Jhin as that’s what most people are looking for

Personally I think that Runaan's Hurricane should get removed but I’ll place that decision onto you. If it has only ever been built in 6 games (out of pretty much millions), it’s safe to say that it’s probably not going to be that good of an item as others.

Other than that I like this section, you explain all the items you use on Jhin and in what situation they will be of best use (again, about the Hurricane, unsure if it’s useful really xd).


The final chapters before Matchups

The sentence you put in the first part about his Laning phase “With that being said, the laning phase is extremely complex because how you play the lane will depend entirely on the 2v2 match-up.” doesn’t flow very well, I would make it “With that being said, the laning phase is extremely complex because of how you play the lane and it will depend entirely on the 2v2 match-up” instead.

You already explained pretty well on how to play Jhin in different situations, I bet you can probably fit in more to talk about here (haven’t gotten any ideas myself about it so far), I really like this section.

You talk about how to use his Traps properly, but I could argue that it isn’t just traps that people fail when playing Jhin, some people don’t know how to properly use their Dancing Grenade for max damage, or poking, or dps etc. etc. and some people doesn’t know how to properly use their Deadly Flourish. I’ve even seen people that misunderstand how and when it becomes a good time to use their Curtain Call.

I think instead of making it “How to use Traps” I’d recommend IMO that you turn it into a section on how to properly use his abilities (since you do not mention any of that sort in your abilities section). Traps aren’t the only thing players fail to use properly. :P

I definitely bet you can fit in some more tips in the “Tips & mechanics” section but I’m also sure that it’ll come with time.

Some tips I could think off of my head:

• Using your W Deadly Flourish from fog of war (like a bush etc.) to increase your W accuracy. Though the enemies can still see the W when it comes, it’ll still deny the Audio & the wind up which shows that it’s coming.
• Correct Ultimate usage, again people fail at this. You want to look and figure out where your enemies escape paths are, and line up your ultimate for that purpose. I see so many Jhin players just throwing their ultimate out for no reason and in the wrong locations, making them lose what could have been a free kill due to them being able to easily escape from it.
• Jhin's passive, Whisper, is both a boon and a burden which is obvious. Without question, if you want to play Jhin effectively, you must be able to master moving in between attacks like with any other Ad Carry. Jhin's probably one of the best characters to learn this on, as his fixed attack speed (and comparatively long time in between shots) will encourage you to do something else. Sure, he’s an immobile champion - but you still need to stay mobile after each of your attacks.
• Your four shot is an extremely threatening, 0 mana cost zoning tool that comes up approximately every 7 seconds. Some people forget this every game and doesn’t use the passive properly.
• Jhin is highly favored in engages with both parties at low health because of his ability to execute.
• Jhin, possibly more than any other marksman, thrives and excels in cooperation with his team. You want to be with your teammates as often as possible and if you don’t, you’re pretty much as good as dead.
• Jhin's traps stack in damage, so planting a bunch in one place and rooting someone in them can be a cheesy way to secure a huge chunk of damage, or burst them down completely. While this can still be a difficult task given how often people fall for it, putting one or two traps in an area often used by enemies can often secure many kills.
• It’s very important for people to know that any instances of allied damage outside of your own autos/abilities will allow you to use Deadly Flourish to root a target. Again, people fail at understanding this.
• Like used by many already, if you’re able to root a target, it’ll often be better to root them with Deadly Flourish and then put Curtain Call up to finish them off rather than doing it early and missing or waiting to use the ability after your ultimate.
• Always use your skills during your reload after the fourth shot, because the reload will still occur and you won't be standing around doing nothing while you're unable to attack.
• The tracking of Dancing Grenade is mostly based on proximity to the last bounce, so trying to aim it away from enemies will often make sure that the last bounce, which may have damage amplification, falls towards the target.
• Saving your fourth shot for the final 1.2k-800 health or so of a large neutral objective (examples being Dragons/Barons), as his fourth shot will do more damage than any jungler smite and can snag the objective for your team if your jungler doesn’t have/misses smite anyways.

Hopefully some of them can be of use. :)


Matchups

I read all matchups, I don’t really need to comment that much on them as I think they are perfectly fine as is, just going to mention some things.

Aphelios:
Your sentence “because it is by far his strongest weapon and it makes it very easy for him fights” sounds weird. I would recommend either to put in during after “easy for him” or remove “fights” altogether.

Vayne:
Win condition description: “Don't let her breath”, I assume you mean breathe, also again relatively short description, could always use some more info, like for example a certain ability that is good to keep track off or one that is good to avoid.

Tip about Xayah, it’s always good to keep track of her feathers, regardless if those come from her Q Double Daggers or from the feathers she can use from autos which comes from that said ability. The general rule of thumb is to avoid feathers as those are the reason you’ll get snared and potentially killed.

Love the Adc matchups, only one that I saw you did not mention, will just list here:

• Karthus, popular for many reasons.

Support matchups are also fine, but I feel like some should also be mentioned:

• Annie, very strong support if used right but also a rare situation.
• Fiddlesticks support is still seen, even after rework he’ll still probably be picked for support.
• Gragas, often used together with Yasuo because of their combo.
• Neeko is still a popular support pick.
• Xerath is also still a pretty popular pick for support.

I like that you used a sort of “Win condition” description (might even start using those myself) as it gives the reader clear simple, easy to read and to find knowledge about the matchup given that it’s mostly what people will use when they have a short time to stock up on knowledge before a game. Though said descriptions are sometimes too short or lack more information ( Senna for example).

Given that Supports are also both used for yourself and the enemy team, I really like that you mention what to do when playing with or against them. Even if some of those are more detailed than others.


Conclusion

“Some of the laning phase topics (rewritten using my own knowledge) were inspired by inspired by Emiru’s version.” You put inspired by twice.

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I'm sure that there are more things that you can look to improve with your guide, but where you stand as of right now, the guide is solid. I'm going to let you digest my input, and maybe make some changes.