Excellent Rune recommendation

I understand that, but having studied your guide in more detail, I still disagree with your mastery choices with respect to butchers rather the points spent improving your summoner spells. Also I prefer leveling up Volley first, which you allude to later in your guide, but which I personally feel should be in the cheat sheet.
There are multiple spelling and grammar mistakes, also I disagree with the option of the brutalizer solely for the armor pen unless it is very early game, as late game, 15 armor is very little, thus the black cleaver or last whisper are almost always better choices.

EDIT: Which is more childish, you downvoting my guide for downvoting your guide, or me downvoting your guide without showing my entire reasoning?

Kid i was trying to make it cost effective thats why i didn't add infinity edge, why don't people understand that it is easy to put items on your build but when you actually play and try to follow it you won't even be able to complete it, i could obviously add infinity edge and frozen mallet in my build but getting those items can be hard for most people thats why it is titled beginners guide, you should see why the items are not as strong as it could be because i am trying to make it cost effective, hope you understand

I feel that putting 2 points into butcher is a waste, rather than one into summoners wrath, you need to get infinity edge I feel, otherwise, yes you are critting, but there is virtually no power behind the punch.

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And Some moreColors In Your Build And Not to Use Wals Of Tekst. If you Orginisize Some more It would Be better Looking

phantom provides escape ability and chasing ability along with mobility which can help your early game since you should still be trying to farm thats why i put phantom early but if i have enough gold for even B.F. sword i would obviously buy it

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I'm a bit skeptical about the Phantom Dancer first. You need damage from Infinity Edge or something before you get Phantom. But other than that good job so far. +1

I respect your honest opinion but first try it out instead of using Infinity Edge which is too mainstream and I tried to make it as cost effective as possible.

As a general tip, read http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506 to know everything about how to make a guide. While your formatting is already good, it can be improved.

I don't really agree with Wit's End, ionic sparc and Black Cleaver on Ashe, while I think Infinity Edge is definitly core. Your role as carry is to deal as much dmg as possible with only 1 defence item. I don't think your build can archive this.

Thanks for checking out my 1st guide but in my defense i like to make a low cost build but Frozen Mallet is actually a better idea but just costs 800 more gold.

Heres my +1 (: