Hi there :)

Thank you for bringing your guide to Mobafire.

I am going to review your guide quickly:


Pros:

+ You show us how we can make use of his abilities instead of only explaining what the skills do.

+ You describe the way you play Cho'gath and not only how you equip him.

+ You devide between early, mid and late game.

+ You make use of standard english and avoid colloquial expressions.

+ You split your texts in paragraphs.


Cons:

- You do not use BBcode - this would make you guide a lot more attractive and more comfortable to read. I will show you some examples at the end of my review.

- You do not use line devider - with those you could devide your sections in subsections to make it easier to follow the topic you are currently talking about.

- You give only little information. You should add more section like an justification of your item purchase order, your rune pick and mastery selection, a skill sequence description, optional and situative items and many more. You may take a look at my guide to get some ideas.

- Your summary is more like an ending because you do not sum up your findings.


BBcoding:

You can highlight several things within your guide using BBcode.

For example:

~ champions
~ skills
~ items
~ masteries
~ runes
~ whole mastery trees
~ whole rune sites
~ whole item builds
~ single icons

There is a guide explaining this in detail How to use BBcode

To give you some examples look at this:

[[Katarina]] leads to this Katarina
[[Lich Bane]] lead to this Lich Bane

Furthermore you can use big icons like headings by placing them beneath your floating text on the left or right side of it like you see in this example here. The code used for this is [icon=Heart of Gold size=64 float=left].

If you have got any questions about that you may pm me.

When you have improved your guide, just give me a hint and I will take a second look over it. Then you might get a +1 from me ;)

Did this review help you? Then do not forget to +Rep me and maybe you would like to review my guide aswell :)

You need to add color and bbcode. Noone will be able to read a huge wall of thext. read jhoijhoi's instructions on how to write a guide here. I also disagree with your masteries, and there are better rune alernatives. I will check back on this later expecting some changes.