Well I'm not a *******. I read other's guides before I vote. You should think about it. Some people like me spend hour's for their guide's. Your guide isn't that bad. If you just try it again and again maybe you will get to top 3 with your guide. +1..

guinsoo 1st item?
cmon man this is jax not akali everytime evertype ever enemy trinity 1st
and its better to get a witness end or a frozen mallet
and thornmail but guinsoo 1st items is tottaly wrong

Starter Guide:

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506

Yes of course, I'm not an *******, and I understand that English may not be your native language. Firstly, you obviously have some spelling mistakes, grammar errors, which aren't too big of a deal.

Secondly, go to this link to learn the difference between good and bad guides, what you have done is classic of a "bad guide" in the sense that you have placed personal input into everything you have written, saying "I like flash/Love flash!" that's not important, you have to make sure you are using a summoner spell that suits him for EVERYONE to use, not just your personal gamestyle.

The image sizes and the icons which are within the guide do not look nice, look back to your Flash and Ignite icons, it doesn't look right.

The guide isn't very long and detailed, if you wish to leave an impression on someone by completely teaching them your champion; which is what guides do, then make it long and detailed! But keep it relevant!

Also, some sections are wrong, in my opinion, nothing you have to change, just my own personal preference. If you COULD fix this guide, and make it look neat and tidy, I would change my vote :)

Could you point out what I've done wrong so I can improve myself? And so you know, English isn't my naitive language.

Bad Grammar, Bad Formatting, Good-ish build, not very in-depth, wrong in some sections.

Thanks for the critisism. I will definitly try it as you mentioned. But is it a smart idea to start with Doran's Shield? Wouldn't it be better to buy boots and then the shield?

I do like your guide and mostly tanky DPS,but there is still some mistakes.
I would say,if you play tanky DPS,you start with Doran's Shield.You don't stack Doran's Blade's after.When building Trinity Force try to get first Sheen as it mostly increases you damage output.By the way I like your buying order- Mercury's Treads, Guinsoo's Rageblade, Trinity Force, Hextech Gunblade, Warmog's Armor, Atma's Impaler=good job!

Good guide. Keep up the good work!